Sunday 18 March 2012

Honest

Kept my tears within,
smiled as good as I can.
They stabbed on and on,
I know the me in me
and will keep on walking
this alley up and down
till that destination.
Take my blood
and my smile,
will keep on walking
hoping,
one day they will be tired,
of everything that stabs.
That's my promise to myself.

5 comments:

  1. take my blood and keep walking...been there

    senryu of blues & honesty


    verification makes it really hard to comment. you'd get more comments if you turned it off. i had to do this several times before it worked!!

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  2. Very well composed poem. loved reading it. Thank you for sharing.

    Namaste

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  3. Such a comforting Zen thought. Hold on to what is truly you.

    Many blessings.

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  4. Maybe those stabs will turn to gentle soothing raindrops in time..I hope..truly honest and reflective writing..Jae

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  5. The ending is full of perseverance and promise! I like that.

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