(Pic from Magpie Tales)
Right in the lap of nature
Right in the lap of nature
well immersed in his
own minds womb
tied by his whims and
fancies
he lies tempted, not
knowing
the endless world of
happiness
lying deep in the
soil, the seed
that needs pure tears
of heart
and honest deeds of
mind
to flourish and stay
as a cool shade
for every soul that
comes tired.
He lies tempted, not
knowing
the bliss of being
the purest soul,
he lies tempted, not
knowing
it takes just a
wishful awakening
to break free...
Yes, indeed. We have to want to change or, we just stand still where we are and make no progress.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully said Sreeja. :)
Thanks for that..
Deletelies in the cool shade, and also in water...so i'm sure he's not very hot.
ReplyDeletedoes he want to break free?
apollo and the two muses
He is not hot, he is lying tempted by his own fancies....to know life more he has to break free....he has to become the cool shade where others too can rest.....that is my own fancy about life....thanks zongrik for the visit...you made me think to craft poems more powerfully..
DeleteAhh, i went into a sort of suspended animation reading this Sreeja , thanks.
ReplyDeleteoh..thanks...thanks..
DeleteThis speaks to me in a spiritual way. He only needs the willingness it seems.
ReplyDeleteYes you got it right..
DeleteBeautiful thoughts in this poem Sreeja....love your blog! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Carrie...
DeleteGood stuff.. Loved it entirely..
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