Monday 30 April 2012

just pure....

(PIC from Magpie Tales)
Words and wounds
Enticed me in
In to the soul
Naked truths
Pure thoughts
And me
Words and wounds
Enticed me in
Deep into the soul

19 comments:

  1. Sreeja this is beautiful....your words match the photo perfectly..."In to the soul naked truths pure thoughts and me words and wounds enticed me in deep into the soul"....simply lovley! :-)

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  2. interesting repetition...naked truths and pure thoughts....i am not sure they always go together but...smiles...i like this one...it dances a bit...

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    1. Sometimes naked truths brings out our most pure thoughts from within and I believe in those thoughts....Thanks Brian...smiles...

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  3. Lovely poem... words, wounds always winds us up searching for the truth!
    When you drown in your crystal clear tears.

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    1. Thanks so much for your visit Pranita...thanks for the appreciation.

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  4. Words and wounds are so often intertwined...very nicely written!

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  5. All truth is naked, isn't it. And yes, words and wounds do entice us to look deeper for their answers.
    Lovely interpretation of this picture Sreeja :)

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  6. beautiful poem.!yes, wounds and words. wounds of self, words from others do help in our quest for the truth.! wonderful take on the prompt!

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  7. Thank you so much...it is so true.

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  8. I love the tenderness carried through here.....and so unique in how it fits the prompt pic this week!

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  9. ohhh do we always like, need or want naked truths ...true wounds that are deep within ...great write thank you for sharing x

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  10. Very original , powerful metaphor for soul travel

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  11. wow, thats very lovely.


    thank you for your comment.

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  12. You took what is so strange and made it soft and beautiful.

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