Saturday 30 June 2012

Purity


Guess the whisper of the wind
The fragrance of bud, longing bloom
Whisper of the soul, holding inside
Of bud, soul, the wind, harmonious
The longing, holding wind, passion sufficed
Wind bloom inside, harmonious, sufficed, purity.




Square poem, can read it vertically or horizontally........same. OOPS I am late to submit.

15 comments:

  1. Beautiful and mind blowing. This is something which I can never do...

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  2. Thank you so much...I am honored...but believe me I too thought so...but it happened... at least I tried...

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  3. I truly did enjoy reading this one... the words had an impact on me... Cheers!

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  4. Wow ... loved the concept of squre poem .... I don't know how you did this ... looks so tough ... wow ... too good ma'am :-)

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    1. It was from dVerse ...but I was late to submit. Thank you.

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  5. Well done! I attempted that form, but never managed to pull it off. :)

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    1. Thank you...you can....dig yourself out.....

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  6. Superb Sreeja!!! Square Poem!! I am going to try it soon! And btw loved the new look.

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    1. Thank you twice.....share it with me...for my pleasure...

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  7. Love this square poem...I tried to write something but wasn't successful

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  8. Thank you...and I know you can.....

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  9. Gosh, this is so freakin' awesome... Pardon my language, but this is really AWESOME. At first, I couldn't understand what it meant when you said read it vertically or horizontally it's the same, but then... OMG! This is freaking awesome! :D

    I have never tried this. Sounds really cool and interesting and equally difficult, too. Great job, Sreeja.

    Can I say the awesome thing again? :D :P

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  10. Gosh, this is so freakin' awesome... Pardon my language, but this is really awesome. At first, I couldn't understand what it meant when you said read i vertically or horizontally, but then... OMG! This is freaking awesome! :D

    I have never tried this. Sounds really cool and interesting and equally difficult too. Great job, Sreeja.

    Can I say the awesome thing again? :D :P

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  11. I got it from dVerse...but couldn't submit on time....thank you so much....and try hand to....you can....

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