Guess the whisper of the wind
The fragrance of bud, longing bloom
Whisper of the soul, holding inside
Of bud, soul, the wind, harmonious
The longing, holding wind, passion sufficed
Wind bloom inside, harmonious, sufficed, purity.
Square poem, can read it vertically or horizontally........same. OOPS I am late to submit.
Square poem, can read it vertically or horizontally........same. OOPS I am late to submit.
Beautiful and mind blowing. This is something which I can never do...
ReplyDeleteThank you so much...I am honored...but believe me I too thought so...but it happened... at least I tried...
ReplyDeleteI truly did enjoy reading this one... the words had an impact on me... Cheers!
ReplyDeleteThank you...
DeleteWow ... loved the concept of squre poem .... I don't know how you did this ... looks so tough ... wow ... too good ma'am :-)
ReplyDeleteIt was from dVerse ...but I was late to submit. Thank you.
DeleteWell done! I attempted that form, but never managed to pull it off. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you...you can....dig yourself out.....
DeleteSuperb Sreeja!!! Square Poem!! I am going to try it soon! And btw loved the new look.
ReplyDeleteThank you twice.....share it with me...for my pleasure...
DeleteLove this square poem...I tried to write something but wasn't successful
ReplyDeleteThank you...and I know you can.....
ReplyDeleteGosh, this is so freakin' awesome... Pardon my language, but this is really AWESOME. At first, I couldn't understand what it meant when you said read it vertically or horizontally it's the same, but then... OMG! This is freaking awesome! :D
ReplyDeleteI have never tried this. Sounds really cool and interesting and equally difficult, too. Great job, Sreeja.
Can I say the awesome thing again? :D :P
Gosh, this is so freakin' awesome... Pardon my language, but this is really awesome. At first, I couldn't understand what it meant when you said read i vertically or horizontally, but then... OMG! This is freaking awesome! :D
ReplyDeleteI have never tried this. Sounds really cool and interesting and equally difficult too. Great job, Sreeja.
Can I say the awesome thing again? :D :P
I got it from dVerse...but couldn't submit on time....thank you so much....and try hand to....you can....
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