Life is ordinary without the magic of words and colors.
You have presented a vivid imagery of the stillness of the surroundings, of the indecisiveness of moments, of wait. If one reads it slowly, taking words in, letting them sink, then this poem reads BEAUTIFUL, Sreeja. :)
Thank you Dear.....
Nice deciphering of the picture. Thought u seem to miss the punctuation again.
Thank you LC...and spare me for that my lord.....will surely take care..
nice...i really like that deep stillness of secrets inside, just like the waves....great way to set the mood in this...
It's all for her to endure and resolve. It's a personal thing. Time is an element that helps to ease the shock. Wonderful write Sreeja!Hank
you've made waiting sensual. finely written.
Oh thats so appreciating comment..thank you so much for this support....
The heart truly is an ocean...
Yes ..thank you .....
......and what will she decide!
Hmmm...must wait and see...thank you....:-)
I love the mystery here, Sreeja.
Thank you Mary....
Beautifully emotive :-)
Lovely description Sreeja.
You have presented a vivid imagery of the stillness of the surroundings, of the indecisiveness of moments, of wait.
ReplyDeleteIf one reads it slowly, taking words in, letting them sink, then this poem reads BEAUTIFUL, Sreeja. :)
Thank you Dear.....
DeleteNice deciphering of the picture. Thought u seem to miss the punctuation again.
ReplyDeleteThank you LC...and spare me for that my lord.....will surely take care..
Deletenice...i really like that deep stillness of secrets inside, just like the waves....great way to set the mood in this...
ReplyDeleteIt's all for her to endure and resolve. It's a personal thing. Time is an element that helps to ease the shock. Wonderful write Sreeja!
ReplyDeleteHank
you've made waiting sensual. finely written.
ReplyDeleteOh thats so appreciating comment..thank you so much for this support....
DeleteThe heart truly is an ocean...
ReplyDeleteYes ..thank you .....
Delete......and what will she decide!
ReplyDeleteHmmm...must wait and see...thank you....:-)
DeleteI love the mystery here, Sreeja.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mary....
DeleteBeautifully emotive :-)
ReplyDeleteLovely description Sreeja.
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