Monday, 16 July 2012

She sighs...

(My Pic collection)

clad in lush green she sighs life's stories eternal.....
mist of her lost dreams floats over
as sweet tears dense, waiting.......

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  1. Kewl nice n short yet speaks well

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    1. Thank you for this appreciation.....

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  2. Touching, Sreeja! Quite so..

    We can take the 'she' in two terms and the verse fits both beautifully.

    Is this picture from your recent outing?

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    1. Thank you VJ...yup we had a weekend outing....enjoyed so much....so much greenery and a waterfall hidden....(MEENMUTTY and PONMUDI trivandrum)

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  3. Good wordplay ... and the image fits perfectly :-)

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  4. Has the feel if not the form of haiku.

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    1. I didn't mean Haiku ....just three lines for the picture....I haven't tried Haiku yet...thank you so much....

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  5. The words suit the picture so well. A touch of damp mist and perhaps, sadness.
    Lovely imagery Sreeja :)

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  6. "mist of her lost dreams floats over"
    Your poem starts in Green and ends in sadness
    but the mist and the tears and the green will maybe nurture each other?!

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    1. Thank you Susan....sure tears will always give you more, to your wisdom to take things more bravely...

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  7. Lovely thoughts and photo.........I love "mist of her lost dreams."

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  8. Beautiful! Love the multiple interpretations of this.

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    1. Thank you......nature can always reflect....

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  9. Nice capture of her waiting in sadness ~

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    1. She needs that rain..thank you...

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  10. I find this deeply moving; anyone could identify with this ... searching the soul surrounded by nature. Beautiful.

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    1. Thank you....yes we all can....

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  11. This is beautiful...stunning write.

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