Cynics,
fuss and they pride over ego
True heart
loves and accepts life for what it is
Who can
make a mirror?
To show the
cynics their ugly face,
Come on
Come on
Who can
make that mirror?
That will
echo,
Envious gossips.
Come on
Come on
Who can
make that mirror?
think if someone has become cynic, there was a lot of hurt and pain on the way...good to help them see themselves by providing that mirror..
ReplyDeleteI just made it up in one minute....a weak attempt...the linky widget was going to expire.......
ReplyDeleteThis can't be a weak attempt ... a really wonderful poetry !!!
DeleteThank you Amrit....
Deletehmm....i think what has to be asked is what is it that jaded them in the first place
ReplyDeletehe he he .....
Deleteyeah....i need one of those mirrors! not bad considering you wrote this in 1 minute?...1 minute poetry...now THERE'S a prompt waiting to happen! thanks for writing and sharing!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much.....I think that mirror needs to be manufactured soon....
ReplyDeleteThe 'Come on, come on' gives it a tone of a song. :)
ReplyDeleteAgree with Amrit... it ain't a weak attempt but a nice one.