Wednesday 3 April 2013

#3 napowrimo

( Snap from Jidhu Jose <http://jidhu.blogspot.in/#axzz2PPwvTm8r>)

Where I fall behind
lies grass and water, bind
together in, know not what passion blind…
fallen and in pieces, my mind
will grow as grass  and grow a thousand
times, this earth holds life unbound,
precious, let in and drench in water, calmed;
this earth holds life unbound.



22 comments:

  1. smiles...very cool...nice use of repetition...all in how we look at life isnt it...and the possibilities of life unbound....

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  2. I liked "my mind will grow as grass and grow a thousand times". This poem had a really nice feel to it - almost fragmented, very freeflowing. Thank you for sharing.

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  3. I love "my mind will grow as grass" Beautiful poem!

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  4. fallen and in pieces, my mind
    will grow as grass

    Hope in the future and a life out of sorrow. I like this and the feeling of regeneration.

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  5. "my mind will grow as grass and grow a thousand
    times" This line shows the strength. Well written, Sreeja! :)

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  6. Oh, yes... love this, Sreeja.

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    1. You are welcome Jidhu...looking forward for such super snaps...

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  8. Lovely shot and beautiful words.

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  9. Beautiful words and a lovely shot.

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  10. Love the message in your words .......

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  11. This is beautiful, Sreeja. yes, indeed, this earth holds life unbound!

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  12. Lovely ideas here--expressed well. I also like the photo. And thank you for visiting my blog!

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  13. "Unbound." What a wonderful image. Your poem is just lovely!!!

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  14. Beautiful piece had a lovely meditative quality

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