From dVerse poets pub.
A stream travelled, and a thousand,
parallel, parallel;
on their own hues washing colours iridescent,
life’s own
colours,
a glowing sun, warmth,
burning truth
turned all streams to wind,
taking the spirits
they travelled miles and miles,
tasting the very salt;
redemption, liberation
they turned a thousand drops,
moist, true, iridescent
on cosmic revelation
a million spirit taking wings, fly high,
dazzling, enchanting every spirit,
fly high, high, high…
This has a very lovely spiritual tone to it, Sreeja. Nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Mary....
DeleteWhat a hopeful vision, filed with fireworks and joy. Can we do it alive or is this death is for?
ReplyDeleteMaybe, just maybe we can witness!?
Sometimes, this happens, when we can see the actual LIFE in everything, but it is momentary I think, loses in the daily life hussle and bussle ....Thanks Susan...
Deletenice...love the transformation in this...from the streams to mist/steam/spirit..the rather magical end...lovely imagery in your own words...
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Brian...
Deletetasting salt of redemption indeed.. those spirits travelled far... till they fly high ... magical
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DeleteI like the cosmic revelation, a million spirit taking wings, dazzling ~ Creative response to the prompt ~
ReplyDeleteThank you Grace...
Deletea million spirit taking wings, fly high,
ReplyDeletedazzling, enchanting every spirit,
fly high
One often reflects and yearn to be with some powers that blend and mould our lives. You've brought us through that journey! Great take sreeja!
Hank
Thank you so much Hank, ... a great support...
Deleteredemption, liberation . . . mercy for the human spirit captured in a lovely, spiritual piece.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Wendy...
DeleteLoved the way the bubbles found their way in your words. To rise, high, high...
ReplyDeleteThank you....
DeleteBeautiful and creative response to the challenge...I agree there is a spiritual feeling to this...
ReplyDeleteYea of course a little bit spiritual thoughts... thanks Susie...
Deleteyou beautifully capture the movement and the ever transforming with this..
ReplyDeleteThank you so much...
ReplyDeleteReading it felt so peaceful and serene ... loved it !!!
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