Wednesday 12 June 2013

Deep Blue



    Night flowed in and pooled
                                 deep blue

             blue   blue ocean sky   pulsating
                                         in kholed eyes
A wish jar afloat
                              bearing ages
                   in deep blue    pulsated with secrets
my butterfly eyes made
            scribbles   wishing distant stars

                   night closed in  ages  in kholed eyes

                        dreams take rest on star studded secrets.


13 comments:

  1. A lovely description of the night filled with star studded secrets ~ The blue color was dominant in your opening verses ~

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  2. oo i like this....i like kholed....and the wish jar and butterflies add a bit of magic to this for me...smiles....star studded secrets...cool line that too...

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  3. I like it. Your words and your presentation.

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  4. "dreams take rest on star studded secrets" so true.

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  5. Beautiful writing. Really love that last line!

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  6. You have described night with such beauty. "blue ocean sky pulsating in kholed eyes" Love it!

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  7. this reads like a chagall painting...love the images

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  8. I love the butterfly eyes... it weaves such a splendid piece of poetry.

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  9. Lovely. I especially like the last line.

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  10. *sigh*
    Such an apt and vivid description of that universal mystery called night... lovely !

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  11. Lovely.
    "dreams take rest on star studded secrets" - and so they do.
    Anna :o]

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  12. Love the colorful theme and the images you chose to represent it.

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  13. Sreeja, this is incredibly lovely! I read it over and over--a complete delight of images and words:-)

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