Night flowed in and pooled
deep blue
blue blue
ocean sky pulsating
in kholed
eyes
A wish jar afloat
bearing ages
in deep blue
pulsated with secrets
my butterfly eyes made
scribbles wishing
distant stars
night closed in
ages in kholed eyes
dreams take rest on star studded secrets.
A lovely description of the night filled with star studded secrets ~ The blue color was dominant in your opening verses ~
ReplyDeleteoo i like this....i like kholed....and the wish jar and butterflies add a bit of magic to this for me...smiles....star studded secrets...cool line that too...
ReplyDeleteI like it. Your words and your presentation.
ReplyDelete"dreams take rest on star studded secrets" so true.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful writing. Really love that last line!
ReplyDeleteYou have described night with such beauty. "blue ocean sky pulsating in kholed eyes" Love it!
ReplyDeletethis reads like a chagall painting...love the images
ReplyDeleteI love the butterfly eyes... it weaves such a splendid piece of poetry.
ReplyDeleteLovely. I especially like the last line.
ReplyDelete*sigh*
ReplyDeleteSuch an apt and vivid description of that universal mystery called night... lovely !
Lovely.
ReplyDelete"dreams take rest on star studded secrets" - and so they do.
Anna :o]
Love the colorful theme and the images you chose to represent it.
ReplyDeleteSreeja, this is incredibly lovely! I read it over and over--a complete delight of images and words:-)
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