Thursday, 1 August 2013

Just one drop


                       Just one drop
By the tip of a leaf

A thousand fall winds
Bosomed for icy sleep

                       Beneath   the earth
Sun’s bride

A soul of dreams

Molten dreams

17 comments:

  1. very evocative for a short....i lover the earth sun's bride....and how you go from a small raindrop to much much larger

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  2. A sweetly meaningful ode to mother nature.

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  3. Beautiful imagery, Sreeja. An awakening, renewal emerging ... especially love the line, "sun's bride" :)

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  4. Wow! This is so beautiful . . . icy sleep - molten dreams. I really get that - and for a moment felt like I could cry . . . though I'm still trying to wrap my head around the piece and figure out why. A really lovely poem and great poetry.

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    1. Thank you so much Wendy....you touched me with those words....

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  5. ...very refreshing to read & loved the images i get from here.... smiles...

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  6. "Sun’s bride

    A soul of dreams

    Molten dreams"


    Perfect, Sreeja. :)

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    1. Thank you and where were you....missed you...

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  7. I really like the last two lines of this poem, Sreeja.

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