Friday, 2 August 2013

the way it goes....

Bohemian heart with wings
 Eyes fluttered, sky met sea
Five letters, h a p p y
They are free like clouds on sky
                 Rains and builds, goes with wind

14 comments:

  1. "They are free like clouds on sky"

    Just 'the way it goes', Sreeja. Interesting words, you use. :)

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  2. ha let that bohemian heart fly....
    happy is a good way to be
    rain/clouds come to us all
    but dont dictate our smile

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  3. nice...i like the bohemian heart with wings...sky meeting sea... here's to happiness and going with the wind..

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  4. h a p p p y-- now THAT is happy! :) ~peace, Jason

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  5. This made my day ... such a "happpy" poem :-)

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  6. Love your "Bohemian Heart," Sreeja. And yes, it's fine to write "happpy," because it reflects that extra something in your heart that made you write it down in the first place. Peace, Amy

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  7. Something about this makes me want to grab hold of a cloud and fly...but today, clear blue skies!

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  8. The whole of the vocabulary in this poem is as bohemian as the opening lines.

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  9. now that happpy happy was part of my half sleepy state...oops sorry...

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  10. They are free like clouds on sky
    Rains and builds, goes with wind

    One can never lose count on being free! Nicely sreeja!

    Hank

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  11. Really love the feeling of freedom you give in this poem!!

    Thanks for commenting on my poem today. I am looking for a more current poem than this one, but don't find one. I always like to see you around the blogosphere!

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    1. Thanks a lot Mary....something or other always kept me away from my pen.....was feeling so sad about it....trying to start once more.....thank you so much!

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