December,
like a snow flower
you touch with your cold fingers,
I
surrender myself like a lost lover.
Your
cold fingers playing violin
Like
snow flowers showering;
Nostalgic
dreams afloat
Of
sunshine and rain,
They
evoke moments,
Those
pebbles I kept
On
and on, building thoughts
Thoughts
that never perish
Thoughts
that make me…
I
sleep in your cold hands,
December
you play the songs
of snow flowers...
I sleep losing myself in you.
December can be a cold month in the northern hemisphere; but it's not the coldest. I love the image of December's cold fingers playing violin - that's not going to be a cheerful tune, is it?
ReplyDeleteTony
not the coldest here either....in fact here there is no severe winter season....but all months have got a special feeling attached to it....I enjoy those thoughts....Thanks a lot.
ReplyDeleteI like the violin playing and music, strings taut and quivering.
ReplyDeleteplaying violin and the song of snow flowers.. the finding rest and sleep in his cold hands... you paint him warm here...despite its cold nature you know...smiles
ReplyDeleteI like the way you compared December to a snow flower. I enjoyed the nostalgic dreams of sunshine and rain despite the wintery feel of this poem!
ReplyDeleteLovely personification of December. Our December is indeed cold, 11 degrees F this morning. I'm not sure I would welcome a lover that cold but there is something so enticing in your poem.
ReplyDeleteI think I enjoyed that kind of December quite a lot.. there is a tenderness in those cold notes... and I agree with Tony.. that December can be a little bit too cold... lovely piece..
ReplyDeleteI feel like images like a dream. Frozen in a hushed, frosted world. So much hope that the rise will finally rise for the thaw.
ReplyDeletesounds like a way to make it through winter indeed....smiles...embracing it as a lover, that might help, smiles...i miht just have to give myself over and find its music as well...smiles.
ReplyDeleteDecemvbers make us lazy :-P Speaking of which, it's 10 degree here today in Delhi ;-)
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