Sunday 21 December 2014

half spilled

half cup chilled dreams, chasing me
blankets of doubts flying close by;
rippling, silver reveries glimmering
in mirrors, on face and in heart, eloping,
half spilled, half shaking, moving
and then every time sways
between spilling and catching,
and the road spreading so long


11 comments:

  1. Those dreams.. they drive us through life don't they?

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  2. Vivid rushing never still dizzying dreams. Love it/them!

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  3. Those half and half dreams, we keep chasing them on the road so long ~ Lovely offering sreeja ~

    Happy Holidays ~

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  4. Merry Christmas Sreeja! Have a dream free relaxing holiday.

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  5. If dreams chase, I hope they are good dreams! Smiles.

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  6. sometimes doubts seem to go side by side with our dreams...though hopefully the dreams are stronger... merry christmas to you...

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  7. Ah.. the forces of relative free will.. the dreams.. the doubts do A dance of life...

    Ah.. the doubts of relative free will gone.. the dreams.. the dreams.. the dreams...

    All let go..

    Do flow.. in creating the greatest light IN LIFE of Dreams!

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  8. Dreams make us go on in life ... beautiful poem :-)

    Merry Christmas :-)

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  9. This is beautiful to read - shimmering, like the "glimmering(s) in mirrors".

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  10. it is so moving to read.
    chasing dreams and battle for a foot-stand are everyone's daily life.

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