Friday 18 September 2015

Confined



It’s stiff and hard... knotted
to each other, tight knots,
I try with my nails that are cut
in a slightly curved line,
cut close to the flesh--
I regret cutting my nails--
they are bloody treacherous knots;
I have never learned the fine art
of keeping long sharp nails
I have never tried chewing hard things
and too much brushing off of dirt
has left the teeth a bit less of enamel
I regret keeping my mouth so clean
and teeth so tender
for so long periods of time,
slowly, surely they have tied my hands
in treacherous knots--
when you grow, grow wild
with longer nails, stronger teeth
and fiery eyes and elfin charms;
for the art of living should make the soul
 an eagle and a bird of paradise too,
to taste the wine of life—
so stay calm my soul, until I learn,
learn the art of performance
for the knots of general perceptions
and conceptions are always treacherous.








8 comments:

  1. I think when one is confined too long, we forget the wild things ~ There is always something underneath, wanting to get out ~

    I specially admire this part:

    for the art of living should make the soul
    an eagle and a bird of paradise too,
    to taste the wine of life—

    Thanks for joining us at D'verse Sreeja ~

    Hope you are well ~

    Grace

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  2. A lot of complications burden us - and they are truly treacherous. Thank you for joining OLN.

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  3. for the knots of general perceptions
    and conceptions are always treacherous.

    This is so true.. when one restricts their line of thinking.. their mind is pulled into knots which prove to be treacherous.
    Excellent write.

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  4. I think growing wild is a good way to break free of feeling confined. I sense lots of complexity, emotions.

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  5. Whether we confine ourselves or allow others to confine us, it gets indeed painful, the wanting the release, the unsurety. Learning to perform - so often that is part of the confining. Tense write and thought provoking. Spencer is Kanzensakura. Thanks for joining us at OLN!

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  6. We do need to learn the art of performance...perhaps this helps us in feeling less confined!

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  7. Such a strong metaphor--one I've honestly never seen developed...but so apt. I suspect many of us can relate to the lessons in this.

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  8. When i first come
    alive again..
    the first one
    who rides with
    me tales me
    i am a BLOOD
    red
    witch
    flying
    THROUGH AIR..
    leading a way..
    bewitch
    better..
    bedead..
    as Life..
    perhaps
    by now
    she feels
    i forget but
    nah.. i will
    never forget
    the one who frees
    me to fly blood
    red once
    again..:)

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