Tuesday 31 January 2017

..dawn..



Pic from Google




rays of dawn
falling crisp
on icy pane,
dreams drool
melting on edges
dripping truth,
lazy frame
slowly stirs,
dreams and truth
mix and melt,
warmth and cold
cuddle and dissolve,
surreal thoughts
rise and ignite
day’s start---

a day more to catch butterflies


Visit dVerse for more where we have to write a quadrille with the word 'dawn' included.


14 comments:

  1. I can sense the contrasting emotions for dawn

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  2. It's as if the sunrise is stretching through the words, hands extended towards morning...

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  3. I liked these line showing how thought reacts to the dawn: "surreal thoughts
    rise and ignite
    day’s start"

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  4. Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous write!! ❤️

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  5. Mesmerizing moment. Well crafted

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  6. dreams And truth mix and melt...nice image!

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  7. I can really relate to the dawn you've described with melting ice and thoughts--your words flow well :)

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  8. On the other hand keep still and the butterflies might catch you for a quick kiss then off again.

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  9. Each descriptor of dawn becomes a brilliant line in this poem, Sreeja!

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  10. Mornings do feel magical with all the possibilities of the day to come. Though sometimes those possibilities can elude us, just like butterflies do when we try to catch them.

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  11. What a wonderful way to greet the day, I feel a slow awakening here, lovely :-)

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  12. The ending was unexpected....love it Sreeja ~

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