nights hung on
window;
moon stayed aloof;
i wrote my heart
on clouds,
on wandering lonely
clouds;
it’s still
summer, choking, retching fire;
with rain you
will get my heart,
come and shower on me…
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Oh, that "nights hung on window" and aloof moon got me. Wonderful.
ReplyDeleteI liked the idea of writing your heart on a cloud that has to rain for the heart to be received and you wanting the shower as well with all the heat.
ReplyDeleteJust lovely...I think less is so much more here ;)
ReplyDeleteI loved the postcard image.
ReplyDeleteas good as all other write of yours... you really couldn't miss moon for a love write, isn't it?!! you seem to be totally in love with it!
Tender love poem...those lonely clouds spoke to me. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much..!!
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