Tuesday, 2 May 2017

sparkle or dust?














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the citrus taste of lemon tea
tangy saliva oozes
morning runs through veins

when you brushed a kiss
a sea-side wind waved through
tasting salt and primeval chronicles   


yesterday’s metaphysical reads
precipitated around consciousness
and you send salty tangy feelings

i am soul and body
a sparkle and some dust
i have settled on you, dust,
and sparkled up to galaxies
thirsty of clouds that shower
shall I find in them the enigma---
wrapping a sparkle in dust!


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11 comments:

  1. This is most excellent... love the way you hook me in with that first line..... excellent.

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  2. An excellently painted reflection.

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  3. I liked the description of a kiss being like a sea side wind.

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  4. when you brushed a kiss
    a sea-side wind waved through
    tasting salt and primeval chronicles

    Sometimes a dear one can unwittingly act differently. But a relationship must be preserved! Very true Sreeja!


    Hank

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  5. Love the sensory detail but most specially the sparkle in the dust ~

    A beautiful read Sreeja ~

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  6. I'm taken with the "sparkle in dust" too. Great write!

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  7. i am soul and body
    a sparkle and some dust
    i have settled on you, dust,
    and sparkled up to galaxies
    thirsty of clouds that shower
    shall I find in them the enigma---
    wrapping a sparkle in dust!


    This is sooooo beautiful!!❤️

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  8. This is a really, really beautiful poem.

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