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i have gone waves
shades of aqua
and the whale
song
echoes through
veins
shades of aqua
and the swelling
clouds
rains through the
eyes
oneness of ocean,
muse and self
let’s not break
the spell
this is the realm---
revive, bloom and river
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I have a huge smile after reading your poem, as if ....what? Everything is flowing with life, and sometimes the tides make the rivers rise.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely beautiful. I think the last line has entered my soul.
ReplyDeleteThis is just stunning, Sreeja! I love shades of aqua and whale song and that's such good advice, to 'revive, bloom and river'.
ReplyDeleteNo - don't break the beautiful blue spell it's magical
ReplyDeleteThere is so much yearning in the poem hoping the ways that work are not broken. Sadly there is so much pressure to break the spell that created this beautiful world and what a loss that would be for everyone that cared. Very moving poem.
ReplyDeleteThose shades of aqua are spell bounding indeed. Well-penned.
ReplyDelete-HA
*spellbinding
Delete...revive, bloom and river........Oh I LOVE these words in terms of being advice to save a life! Wonderful!
ReplyDelete"...oneness of ocean, muse and self..." Just perfect!
ReplyDeleteecho of whale song... like that...
ReplyDeleteSome of my very favourite things: the colour, the flow of the river, the swell of the ocean...
ReplyDeleteI love the sensory imagery used here.. really beautiful conception of the rain.
ReplyDeleteShades of aqua ... beautifully written.
ReplyDelete"and the whale song
ReplyDeleteechoes through veins"
Fantastic!
Gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteOh, the 'shades of aqua and whale song'...work beautifully!Loved it, Sreeja!
ReplyDeleteWhale songs in my veins... love that.
ReplyDeleteI liked the idea of not breaking the spell.
ReplyDeleteIndeed. May we add to the magic.
ReplyDeleteBeautifiul!
ReplyDeleteI feel a sense of peacefulness as I read your poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much all dear poets..<3
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