Thursday 28 September 2017

Peridot Soul
















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born out of fire and meteorites
i live the colour of the sun and leaves
and at night i shine evoking the stars
and somewhere in the woods and streams
i lie in deep thoughts and olive ecstasies

here i want to escape chaos for i am a peridot soul
and i need my woods of celestial truth and bliss
for i am born out of fire and meteorites
and some olive ecstasies





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6 comments:

  1. I like how you let the birth to the gem to became its (and yours) soul.

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  2. You absolutely nailed this birth stone prompt -- and with one of the most difficult words: peridot. Love the repetition --- love writing with the "I" --
    So very glad you posted to the prompt! Wondering if you knew about this stone and it's multiple facets before the prompt? Loving this post!

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  3. I like the idea of lying in "deep thoughts and olive ecstasies".

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  4. This was my favorite bit: "somewhere in the woods and streams
    i lie in deep thoughts and olive ecstasies". Very nice!

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  5. "i lie in deep thoughts and olive ecstasies"
    Wow! We must all be related to gems.

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  6. I love, 'deep thoughts and olive ecstasies.'

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