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born
out of fire and meteorites
i
live the colour of the sun and leaves
and
at night i shine evoking the stars
and
somewhere in the woods and streams
i
lie in deep thoughts and olive ecstasies
here i want to escape chaos for i am a peridot soul
and
i need my woods of celestial truth and bliss
for
i am born out of fire and meteorites
and some olive ecstasies
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I like how you let the birth to the gem to became its (and yours) soul.
ReplyDeleteYou absolutely nailed this birth stone prompt -- and with one of the most difficult words: peridot. Love the repetition --- love writing with the "I" --
ReplyDeleteSo very glad you posted to the prompt! Wondering if you knew about this stone and it's multiple facets before the prompt? Loving this post!
I like the idea of lying in "deep thoughts and olive ecstasies".
ReplyDeleteThis was my favorite bit: "somewhere in the woods and streams
ReplyDeletei lie in deep thoughts and olive ecstasies". Very nice!
"i lie in deep thoughts and olive ecstasies"
ReplyDeleteWow! We must all be related to gems.
I love, 'deep thoughts and olive ecstasies.'
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