tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post1135241005372107186..comments2023-10-28T16:37:02.800+05:30Comments on writing on just to write..........: LingeringSreejahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-38688384103478765952012-09-11T14:08:33.802+05:302012-09-11T14:08:33.802+05:30i must echo those before me ~ a wonderful poem wit...i must echo those before me ~ a wonderful poem with an amazing last line! love it!<br /><br />♥my heart's love songshttp://myheartslovesongs.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-9189588688732321542012-09-05T16:01:42.168+05:302012-09-05T16:01:42.168+05:30thank you so much for being here and putting your ...thank you so much for being here and putting your valuable comment......:-)Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-60397830356398136102012-09-05T16:00:24.199+05:302012-09-05T16:00:24.199+05:30Thank you so much for this support....Thank you so much for this support....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-87190623517133939912012-09-05T05:27:48.076+05:302012-09-05T05:27:48.076+05:30Killer last line...sorry but had to repeat that ag...Killer last line...sorry but had to repeat that again. The rest are equally as mesmerizing, but to end with that one is awesome. Love is a crazy thing.....but its much less so with words like these to fall back on. Great writing.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-3163706198657056292012-09-05T01:09:48.639+05:302012-09-05T01:09:48.639+05:30Last line is so awesome!!!! :DLast line is so awesome!!!! :Dhjdbedfbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02789484033106868207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-83521008623597011022012-09-04T10:37:54.734+05:302012-09-04T10:37:54.734+05:30thank you so much Susie....thank you so much Susie....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-19038302691145511442012-09-04T10:04:54.510+05:302012-09-04T10:04:54.510+05:30So beautiful..."every book has your eyes driz...So beautiful..."every book has your eyes drizzling words" I love that lineSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-38613656982538193732012-09-04T09:40:03.329+05:302012-09-04T09:40:03.329+05:30Thank you so much Margaret....Thank you so much Margaret....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-68400569533538945672012-09-04T09:39:41.006+05:302012-09-04T09:39:41.006+05:30May be this thought has been there in an earlier o...May be this thought has been there in an earlier one. Ha ha no celebrity here Susan.....I don't know about every one...but when your partner is such a guy you can weave many love poems like this.....actually this was a prompt from a friend.....thank you so much Susan....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-50349380302423779512012-09-04T09:37:12.215+05:302012-09-04T09:37:12.215+05:30Thank you so much Bren.....Thank you so much Bren.....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-9417186832256611182012-09-04T09:36:45.505+05:302012-09-04T09:36:45.505+05:30Thank you Sherry.....:-)Thank you Sherry.....:-)Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-57109296362329648992012-09-04T09:31:56.376+05:302012-09-04T09:31:56.376+05:30thumbs up on that last line!thumbs up on that last line!Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-37274994496455967532012-09-04T07:26:54.568+05:302012-09-04T07:26:54.568+05:30Have I read this one before in a longer form? The...Have I read this one before in a longer form? There is something familiar about settling for the presences she can have when the object of affection is not available: "Every book has your eyes, drizzling words" the very excess, plethora of him to the you who masquerades . . . pretending the poetry is between, is in motion--not just the droplets going with all else to the sea . . . Does everyone in youth accept only that portion? Or are we talking about the relationship of a young one to a famous singer, poet, or movie star?Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-50127017537591811882012-09-03T22:03:39.438+05:302012-09-03T22:03:39.438+05:30How the heart aches to be with the one it loves. T...How the heart aches to be with the one it loves. This is really beautiful writing Sreeja. I agree with Sherry, each stanza is somehow better than the one before. The last two are stunning!Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-31669691963577126532012-09-03T21:07:15.793+05:302012-09-03T21:07:15.793+05:30Each stanza outdoes the one before. The last two a...Each stanza outdoes the one before. The last two are especially wonderful and could stand alone as a complete poem.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-82764398691522463542012-09-03T18:47:25.426+05:302012-09-03T18:47:25.426+05:30Thank you Grace....Thank you Grace....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-3440081455705497412012-09-03T18:34:12.805+05:302012-09-03T18:34:12.805+05:30This is so lovely...specially the last stanza ~ This is so lovely...specially the last stanza ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-39502549167386051042012-09-03T18:31:59.602+05:302012-09-03T18:31:59.602+05:30Thank you very much Mary.....Thank you very much Mary.....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-26123705744413960362012-09-03T18:31:35.206+05:302012-09-03T18:31:35.206+05:30oh my pleasure....thanks a lot...... oh my pleasure....thanks a lot...... Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-22156299421024025632012-09-03T18:30:24.236+05:302012-09-03T18:30:24.236+05:30Thank you .....Thank you .....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-41350951747560638222012-09-03T18:01:17.860+05:302012-09-03T18:01:17.860+05:30If we care about someone, we sometimes do seek the...If we care about someone, we sometimes do seek them (or find them without having to seek) in other things we do during the day...which can either be a good or haunting. I love the lines:<br /><br />As monsoon takes all droplets to ocean,<br />As breeze carries natre everywhere<br />And water embraces sun at every motion.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-64362988629428599472012-09-03T17:50:02.151+05:302012-09-03T17:50:02.151+05:30Th last few sentences took my breath away. Just be...Th last few sentences took my breath away. Just beautiful!<br /><br />"I console my heart to have that potion,<br />To breathe you and live you everywhere,<br />For love has no margin but poetry in motion"Katerihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05645403612156172760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-70703980731538417702012-09-03T17:10:42.900+05:302012-09-03T17:10:42.900+05:30Breathing in these exhilerating emotions can be em...Breathing in these exhilerating emotions can be empowering! Lovely poem!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-2935975989888585332012-09-03T16:24:57.553+05:302012-09-03T16:24:57.553+05:30"For love has no margin but poetry in motion&..."For love has no margin but poetry in motion" - This line left me speechless. Too good !!!Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.com