tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post1267132355967746899..comments2023-10-28T16:37:02.800+05:30Comments on writing on just to write..........: Liberation.Sreejahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-10371797505769795662013-02-03T14:16:27.630+05:302013-02-03T14:16:27.630+05:30really cool, love the flow here. A strong piece. ...really cool, love the flow here. A strong piece. Really enjoyed the read. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-22337787849484851222013-01-22T21:15:09.151+05:302013-01-22T21:15:09.151+05:30...that must have been quite a posture to acquire ......that must have been quite a posture to acquire such state of freedom in mind & soul...i like how the flow goes & becomes...great thoughts...smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08116213800655914273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-21679030551186358782013-01-22T20:46:35.594+05:302013-01-22T20:46:35.594+05:30Quite intense, I could almost feel and relate to t...Quite intense, I could almost feel and relate to the opening lines. Saru Singhalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12860642404643756746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-23914503622269483672013-01-22T12:34:30.706+05:302013-01-22T12:34:30.706+05:30Splendid, Sreeja.
"winged bats of dark corn...Splendid, Sreeja. <br /><br />"winged bats of dark corners"<br />"he struggles midst Nirvana and Bhoga— distilling"<br /><br />Vaishali Jainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05534545110306124811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-47983157054657104222013-01-22T11:57:50.545+05:302013-01-22T11:57:50.545+05:30So marvellous. Each word is a gem. Loved it, Sreej...So marvellous. Each word is a gem. Loved it, Sreeja.Sonia Raohttp://soniaraowrites.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-77315872839947809902013-01-22T10:47:26.062+05:302013-01-22T10:47:26.062+05:30I love this: "They stared, red eyed, sharp na...I love this: "They stared, red eyed, sharp nailed;<br />unfettered , they gnawed" (you have an extra space before the comma)<br /><br />And the last line.jasmine calyxhttp://jasminecalyx.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-6107090228696368942013-01-22T09:44:47.490+05:302013-01-22T09:44:47.490+05:30Ah! How thin the veneer. He needs more practice a...Ah! How thin the veneer. He needs more practice at the calm center, and if there is anything left after they gnaw his existencee, he could practice. Beautifully rich images.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-30303047422817853332013-01-22T09:42:34.922+05:302013-01-22T09:42:34.922+05:30reality crawled, spreading,
while he coiled everyt...reality crawled, spreading,<br />while he coiled everything<br />in one point....powerful Sreeja. Great piece!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-42016709483639368662013-01-22T09:09:29.736+05:302013-01-22T09:09:29.736+05:30"An acquired posture" great beginning, s..."An acquired posture" great beginning, sreeja! love your imagery!<br /><br />♥ my heart's love songshttp://myheartslovesongs.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-89990088271728881962013-01-22T08:27:57.300+05:302013-01-22T08:27:57.300+05:30nice nice Jidhu Josehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06677595730307896302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-71036248564144751912013-01-22T07:32:44.460+05:302013-01-22T07:32:44.460+05:30Whew! This is INTENSELY depthful!Whew! This is INTENSELY depthful!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-82253140383674500582013-01-22T07:21:58.193+05:302013-01-22T07:21:58.193+05:30That must have been quite an experience ~
I like ...That must have been quite an experience ~<br /><br />I like the struggle and realization ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-41634885879999101702013-01-22T07:01:41.800+05:302013-01-22T07:01:41.800+05:30Love the bats of dark corners, and his struggle - ...Love the bats of dark corners, and his struggle - distilling. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-50175664846406549952013-01-22T00:27:38.534+05:302013-01-22T00:27:38.534+05:30disturbing and yet such a beautiful flow.disturbing and yet such a beautiful flow.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-75202943886623375752013-01-22T00:22:19.972+05:302013-01-22T00:22:19.972+05:30"winged bats of dark corners" - how do y..."winged bats of dark corners" - how do you come across such splendidly awesome thoughts .... another masterpiece poem ... superb !!!Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-13490748664684946802013-01-22T00:00:12.917+05:302013-01-22T00:00:12.917+05:30this took quite a dark turn. surprising.this took quite a dark turn. surprising.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-63816455404471627512013-01-21T23:57:26.015+05:302013-01-21T23:57:26.015+05:30Arghh, that was easy!!....I can't meditate. I ...Arghh, that was easy!!....I can't meditate. I can’t stop my mind from thinking. It's way too hard..:((<br />Beautiful writing..Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-19574224227353360782013-01-21T22:06:32.665+05:302013-01-21T22:06:32.665+05:30very sublime, Sreeja, amazing work.
So here is su...very sublime, Sreeja, amazing work.<br /><br />So here is surprise for you....Nomination for Liebster Award.Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.com