tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post1348370457247849940..comments2023-10-28T16:37:02.800+05:30Comments on writing on just to write..........: Rejuvenation!Sreejahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-59421831094616207122012-08-05T10:34:36.263+05:302012-08-05T10:34:36.263+05:30"She was virtue embodied
He was sin exaggerat..."She was virtue embodied<br />He was sin exaggerated"<br /><br />wonderful writing!<br /><br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-64367307707419947732012-08-04T13:16:12.492+05:302012-08-04T13:16:12.492+05:30I too like how there is so much hope at the end of...I too like how there is so much hope at the end of the poem and how the dog helps his master to keep the hope alive. Although I cannot get a stinking plant to grow either, well except the weeds, very confusing sometimes since I try to take such good care of it. <br /><br />Thanks for sharing such a hopeful poem with us for this weeks confusion Theme Thursday.<br /><br />God bless.Mrsupolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01563854387767106508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-70835553884979183642012-08-03T10:20:44.264+05:302012-08-03T10:20:44.264+05:30The trick is to keep breathing!The trick is to keep breathing!Kris McCrackenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789355638389350528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-73123445357477608692012-08-03T09:28:04.851+05:302012-08-03T09:28:04.851+05:30I guess misdemeanors do not make good fertilizer, ...I guess misdemeanors do not make good fertilizer, though they might do for graffiti. This poem accelerates as he tries desperately to cover up his past, but in the end, he must spend a while with his dog and learn while he teaches. Neat poem.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-4197384504987126182012-08-02T23:29:21.180+05:302012-08-02T23:29:21.180+05:30At least he can still hope for that fragrant flowe...At least he can still hope for that fragrant flower.....All is not lost, yet....I espec. loved the line 'he was sin exaggerated'.....I can label some people with that now! loljoannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18255189465024912528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-63981709905732014352012-08-02T13:28:49.504+05:302012-08-02T13:28:49.504+05:30Nice one with hope at the end. That is more import...Nice one with hope at the end. That is more important in the contemporary world of all pervading nastiness.Sabyasachi Patra | Tales from Wild Indiahttp://www.indiawilds.com/diarynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-3772076141659238922012-08-02T05:08:32.937+05:302012-08-02T05:08:32.937+05:30So much depth in this Sreeja!....I am with Ninot.....So much depth in this Sreeja!....I am with Ninot....this is pregnant with hope....:-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-42992849404079280422012-08-01T19:11:21.752+05:302012-08-01T19:11:21.752+05:30I really loved the first three stanzas; they have ...I really loved the first three stanzas; they have some deep emotions written with a lovely touch. Nice write! :)Vaishali Jainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05534545110306124811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-65943436074189572592012-08-01T10:15:30.986+05:302012-08-01T10:15:30.986+05:30This story is pregnant with hope!This story is pregnant with hope!ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-4602371649582993162012-08-01T05:23:47.506+05:302012-08-01T05:23:47.506+05:30A lot of emotions here...I felt the burden of wait...A lot of emotions here...I felt the burden of waiting and his desperation ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-89413177081110878102012-08-01T01:55:22.315+05:302012-08-01T01:55:22.315+05:30you got me from....He was sin exaggerated...great!...you got me from....He was sin exaggerated...great!!Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16584116146098939783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-63476988578950151532012-07-31T18:43:49.825+05:302012-07-31T18:43:49.825+05:30Your poem is so vivid, and reaches deeply into the...Your poem is so vivid, and reaches deeply into the artist's painting, from the hood to the dog and all between, oh to know that true story of why he tossed one boot into the picture! Great writing, thank you!21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-27478660639594753652012-07-31T16:22:36.045+05:302012-07-31T16:22:36.045+05:30very nice....opposites attract...smiles...i feel f...very nice....opposites attract...smiles...i feel for him a bit because it feels like he hopes to turn around...for her sake or others ...i hope his virtue does bloom...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-12570559121291193542012-07-31T16:13:43.575+05:302012-07-31T16:13:43.575+05:30Lovely writing ... like all your posts, this one t...Lovely writing ... like all your posts, this one too leaves a mark on my mind ... well done Sreeja :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-56914679156585978432012-07-31T15:56:19.223+05:302012-07-31T15:56:19.223+05:30I enjoyed the first two stanza especially - I thin...I enjoyed the first two stanza especially - I think they could almost have stood on their own - enough said? :)Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-49160103145912389122012-07-31T14:52:11.385+05:302012-07-31T14:52:11.385+05:30There was ope that he would turn again back to the...There was ope that he would turn again back to the light, I like that. Like the description of the earth in the pot stinking too, vivid picture of nastiness there :)Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.com