tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post1866137317654199560..comments2023-10-28T16:37:02.800+05:30Comments on writing on just to write..........: Somewhere here I am born.Sreejahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-43797412785706999752012-06-27T14:35:08.155+05:302012-06-27T14:35:08.155+05:30Somewhere here I am born, with colors of soil, sky...Somewhere here I am born, with colors of soil, sky and air, you may cross me here, in the air. I am nowhere to see, but I am here, in the soul, in soil, sky and air. - - - <br /><br />This was far and away my favourite section of the whole piece. I love the way the words paint pictures in my mind.Mojo Writinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09457472397010589516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-47408437277340472762012-06-22T15:17:58.447+05:302012-06-22T15:17:58.447+05:30Oh you are so nice to talk this way....most happy ...Oh you are so nice to talk this way....most happy that you read it right as I had this on my mind. Thank you so much...and be a friend.....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-3438615175945122142012-06-22T14:30:20.117+05:302012-06-22T14:30:20.117+05:30Hi Sreeja,
It is funny that when I look at the pi...Hi Sreeja,<br /><br />It is funny that when I look at the picture it makes me dizzy with trying to focus on it. Maybe makes no sense for it to make me dizzy and I'm not sure why but it does. I really could "feel" the picture so much more after reading such a wonderful poem that describes it so well. It is interesting that you can be born on such a well traveled path with so many going their own way after being born. Sometimes we can cross paths and never meet, then other times crash into each other without even trying. That is when you realize it is such a small world and we can have many friends if we choose to.<br /><br />Thanks so much for sharing such a wonderful poem with us for this weeks Theme Thursday.<br /><br />God bless.Mrsupolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01563854387767106508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-27225869448197667902012-06-22T10:54:50.837+05:302012-06-22T10:54:50.837+05:30Yes Archana....I wish everybody finds this simple ...Yes Archana....I wish everybody finds this simple truth in life....Thanks.Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-27572928877862533652012-06-22T10:54:02.742+05:302012-06-22T10:54:02.742+05:30Thank you very much. I enjoyed writing this....Thank you very much. I enjoyed writing this....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-17701758694537513522012-06-22T02:00:36.891+05:302012-06-22T02:00:36.891+05:30Sreeja, this is a lovely. An honest tale. It reall...Sreeja, this is a lovely. An honest tale. It really is as simple as our journey needs to be.Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-37715582957129936462012-06-21T20:06:25.753+05:302012-06-21T20:06:25.753+05:30there is a wonderful feel to this...and being foun...there is a wonderful feel to this...and being found and always being there leaving your marks so that you can be...very nice write...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-10278704751345530612012-06-20T12:17:46.226+05:302012-06-20T12:17:46.226+05:30Yes Kim.....and thanks......Yes Kim.....and thanks......Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-5182091195099022952012-06-20T10:10:30.890+05:302012-06-20T10:10:30.890+05:30Marks of love and simple truths... nothing more va...Marks of love and simple truths... nothing more valuable...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-61221234161916321302012-06-20T09:42:49.534+05:302012-06-20T09:42:49.534+05:30Yes Jyothi...and thank you......Yes Jyothi...and thank you......Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-60330762034288758842012-06-20T09:42:25.228+05:302012-06-20T09:42:25.228+05:30I too loved it after writing...Thank you so much.....I too loved it after writing...Thank you so much..Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-80534165100015204112012-06-20T09:41:53.467+05:302012-06-20T09:41:53.467+05:30Thanks again...Thanks again...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-28090357241521832962012-06-20T09:41:37.793+05:302012-06-20T09:41:37.793+05:30Thank you LC....Thank you LC....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-51200727159119891722012-06-20T09:40:40.925+05:302012-06-20T09:40:40.925+05:30Ah I enjoyed these lines....but I get little time ...Ah I enjoyed these lines....but I get little time to read so .....but I think I should find time to read too....Thanks Susan you elevated my longing to write...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-63042694614584105992012-06-20T09:38:58.468+05:302012-06-20T09:38:58.468+05:30Thank you Vaishali dear...Thank you Vaishali dear...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-53294979227238143122012-06-20T09:38:34.889+05:302012-06-20T09:38:34.889+05:30Thank you Izzy..Thank you Izzy..Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-35571322167557666712012-06-19T23:48:10.857+05:302012-06-19T23:48:10.857+05:30"reflections seldom lie, but tells the story&..."reflections seldom lie, but tells the story".. So true. :)Jyothi Nairhttp://www.ichoosetowrite.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-35450823355311770942012-06-19T22:16:44.120+05:302012-06-19T22:16:44.120+05:30"Somewhere here I am born" is such a lov..."Somewhere here I am born" is such a lovely line...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-36889823937120365922012-06-19T20:53:03.755+05:302012-06-19T20:53:03.755+05:30Superb Sreeja!Superb Sreeja!Lchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08179465361457699946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-27150784553485218422012-06-19T20:52:05.897+05:302012-06-19T20:52:05.897+05:30Superb Sreeja!!!Superb Sreeja!!!Lchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08179465361457699946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-56910043958553452882012-06-19T20:19:16.397+05:302012-06-19T20:19:16.397+05:30Lovely!Lovely!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-46324386279082588192012-06-19T20:16:02.794+05:302012-06-19T20:16:02.794+05:30"the ground shows its stories"
"ref..."the ground shows its stories"<br />"reflections seldom lie"<br />"you may cross me here, in the air<br />I am nowhere to see, but I am here,"<br />and the repetition throughout is haunting and<br />the last verse is gorgeous too-- A finely executed poem.<br /><br />It reminds me of Walt Whitman's last poem in "Song of myself" (#52):<br />"I bequeath myself to the dirt to grow from the grass I love,<br />If you want me again look for me under your boot-soles.<br />You will hardly know who I am or what I mean,<br />But I shall be good health to you nevertheless,<br />And filter and fibre your blood."Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-54369221910408146992012-06-19T19:07:26.001+05:302012-06-19T19:07:26.001+05:30I am nowhere to see, but I am here,
in the soul, i...I am nowhere to see, but I am here,<br />in the soul, in soil, sky and air. >>> Beautiful lines, Sreeja! Simple and deep. Thanks for sharing the poem. :)Vaishali Jainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05534545110306124811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-29635407037660990752012-06-19T18:13:45.425+05:302012-06-19T18:13:45.425+05:30What a great and mysterious song I enjoy it!What a great and mysterious song I enjoy it!izzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-22652664863305566012012-06-19T16:32:00.353+05:302012-06-19T16:32:00.353+05:30This poem was quite introspective... questioning o...This poem was quite introspective... questioning our existence, and the purpose of life... very well defined... loved it :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.com