tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post2544416822984229787..comments2023-10-28T16:37:02.800+05:30Comments on writing on just to write..........: A walkSreejahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-42102071805943083862012-12-24T20:37:41.027+05:302012-12-24T20:37:41.027+05:30I like the different scenes you painted in the fir...I like the different scenes you painted in the first stanza then from the second stanza ~ I live and work in the city so I can relate to the traffic jam and crowded streets ~ <br /><br />Wishing you and your family Happy Holidays ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-47381835171821854202012-12-24T08:13:33.790+05:302012-12-24T08:13:33.790+05:30What a colorful, incredible journey--a real feast ...What a colorful, incredible journey--a real feast of words and images. Nicely done! :-)Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-53807178166941359622012-12-22T09:54:06.194+05:302012-12-22T09:54:06.194+05:30Thanks a lot ... :-)Thanks a lot ... :-)Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-69210191725091579242012-12-22T09:53:36.666+05:302012-12-22T09:53:36.666+05:30Ah, that's real award for me... thanks a lot A...Ah, that's real award for me... thanks a lot Amrit...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-31517758853189143652012-12-22T06:34:17.859+05:302012-12-22T06:34:17.859+05:30A real rhythm here, the vibrancy of life. Beautif...A real rhythm here, the vibrancy of life. Beautifully composed. I truly enjoyed this poem!Mary Ann Potterhttp://www.artist45.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-313479160787642862012-12-21T20:59:45.905+05:302012-12-21T20:59:45.905+05:30I feel so good whenever I read your poems ... they...I feel so good whenever I read your poems ... they enrich me :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-65318311620692186862012-12-21T15:53:37.229+05:302012-12-21T15:53:37.229+05:30Thanks a lot Dani, the side ways that leads to the...Thanks a lot Dani, the side ways that leads to the inner roads and areas are sometimes really different from the areas around the National highway... :-)Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-78279185905467965092012-12-21T15:35:17.749+05:302012-12-21T15:35:17.749+05:30amazing how different two areas so close together ...amazing how different two areas so close together can be, isn't it? great take on the prompt, sreeja!<br /><br />thanks for joining in at Poetry Jam!<br /><br />♥<br />danimy heart's love songshttp://myheartslovesongs.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-40748080405833084102012-12-21T09:28:22.296+05:302012-12-21T09:28:22.296+05:30Thank a lot... and it is fun to have that walk. :-...Thank a lot... and it is fun to have that walk. :-)Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-36131280424303292492012-12-21T09:27:37.694+05:302012-12-21T09:27:37.694+05:30Thank you so much...Thank you so much...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-73258467401594607482012-12-21T03:09:16.483+05:302012-12-21T03:09:16.483+05:30This poem was fun to read. It has a good sense of ...This poem was fun to read. It has a good sense of moving from place to place, each with its different mood. Neat that you find the time and motivation to walk an hour a day.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-5499179001704394352012-12-20T23:28:38.448+05:302012-12-20T23:28:38.448+05:30Nice walk! I especially enjoyed your first stanza...Nice walk! I especially enjoyed your first stanza...the lazy cat, the lazy limbs, the mulling, the sleepiness...lovely ambient effects.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-25427548377755810072012-12-20T21:33:43.069+05:302012-12-20T21:33:43.069+05:30That's it Mary, we all walked together... how ...That's it Mary, we all walked together... how very interesting, isn't it?<br />Thanks a lot... Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-63197395456168780822012-12-20T17:51:47.342+05:302012-12-20T17:51:47.342+05:30i enjoyed very much this walk with you this mornin...i enjoyed very much this walk with you this morning, Sreeja. It is so much fun seeing one another's sights, isn't it? Since we cannot walk together in person, it is nice to be able to walk together in poetry. I liked being able to view the peacefulness as well as the busy-ness of your area. Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-78688104957152807292012-12-20T17:21:38.188+05:302012-12-20T17:21:38.188+05:30thank you Brian, traffic jams are really suffocati...thank you Brian, traffic jams are really suffocating... this lazy cat looks at me seriously, daily... I wonder what she thinks... :-) Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-37690084297172138782012-12-20T17:19:28.833+05:302012-12-20T17:19:28.833+05:30Lol... home is not boring, but when all leave for ...Lol... home is not boring, but when all leave for school and office and I am left behind it is slightly boring. <br />Really interesting thing about that walk, may be I will think of you now, during those walks... <br />Thank you :-)Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-75705673237034838032012-12-20T17:16:40.931+05:302012-12-20T17:16:40.931+05:30Yes, especially when it is a walk and not the car ...Yes, especially when it is a walk and not the car ride... :-)Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-52704776325982965482012-12-20T17:15:35.348+05:302012-12-20T17:15:35.348+05:30Thank you dear VJ...Thank you dear VJ...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-3510033980320099432012-12-20T17:15:13.649+05:302012-12-20T17:15:13.649+05:30Thanks for this support Meenakshi...Thanks for this support Meenakshi...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-21484451928311660742012-12-20T17:01:30.767+05:302012-12-20T17:01:30.767+05:30it is cool to walk together and share stories....a...it is cool to walk together and share stories....and i like the side road much better than the highway...ugh....the traffic jams stress me out...ha....i like your use of sound as well...and the lazy cat....smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-82685660918428181942012-12-20T16:05:36.278+05:302012-12-20T16:05:36.278+05:30I walked the walk with you. It sounds noisy, livel...I walked the walk with you. It sounds noisy, lively, and full of teeming life. You made home sound boring. Lol <br />Nice to know that even half way across the world, we do the same things. I smiled when I read about us walking part way with the kids to the school bus.<br />Lovely read Sreeja :)Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-56845694675850730472012-12-20T15:40:15.278+05:302012-12-20T15:40:15.278+05:30like your ending - a walk outside does bring life ...like your ending - a walk outside does bring life to our days if that is the only chance outside.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-83530577726260832982012-12-20T15:19:56.623+05:302012-12-20T15:19:56.623+05:30It does feel so! I liked the way you presented it,...It does feel so! I liked the way you presented it, Sreeja. Thumbs up! :)Vaishali Jainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05534545110306124811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-11919918210590225322012-12-20T13:39:06.959+05:302012-12-20T13:39:06.959+05:30very well written! You are an amazing poet, mundan...very well written! You are an amazing poet, mundane life brought alive by a master stroke.Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.com