tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post3789651163294223346..comments2023-10-28T16:37:02.800+05:30Comments on writing on just to write..........: hand in hand, let us walk...Sreejahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-13228826661320274342017-04-22T10:50:26.249+05:302017-04-22T10:50:26.249+05:30Thank you all...!Thank you all...!Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-4356712435018922162017-04-22T07:16:14.584+05:302017-04-22T07:16:14.584+05:30For some reason, I have trouble picturing the moon...For some reason, I have trouble picturing the moon crying.<br /><br />I love this line: "there is no constant existence, every night fragmenting"✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-51828224049610490192017-04-22T06:37:45.395+05:302017-04-22T06:37:45.395+05:30I like the evolving phases of the moon ~I like the evolving phases of the moon ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-32956709345783288292017-04-22T06:04:17.993+05:302017-04-22T06:04:17.993+05:30A partnership in love has a lot of sustaining powe...A partnership in love has a lot of sustaining power - that's the beauty of it!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-23251887443577021682017-04-22T05:31:44.144+05:302017-04-22T05:31:44.144+05:30Ever expanding, but... You have done well in captu...Ever expanding, but... You have done well in capturing our imagination. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-62877845259851033852017-04-22T00:41:46.725+05:302017-04-22T00:41:46.725+05:30Beautiful :)Beautiful :)Dr. Vijita Pillaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00045851188041774369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-60709264907124826792017-04-21T23:05:23.476+05:302017-04-21T23:05:23.476+05:30So well done. The lengthening of the lines seems t...So well done. The lengthening of the lines seems to replicate the waxing of the moon. There is no constant existence, indeed!Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-79016328877723876392017-04-21T21:03:23.366+05:302017-04-21T21:03:23.366+05:30The moon keeps us aware of our own "dwindling...The moon keeps us aware of our own "dwindling and mushrooming". Giving "familiar, plain day and nights" is the best gift on "uneven paths". Very nice poem.Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-83632483609526816542017-04-21T20:14:45.975+05:302017-04-21T20:14:45.975+05:30This is absolutely awe-inspiring, Sreeja❤️ I love ...This is absolutely awe-inspiring, Sreeja❤️ I love how your poem spills like moonlight with shiny verses sigh.. especially adore; "I am another moon, dwindling and mushrooming---i will give you my familiar, plain days and nights if you be walking, walking with me on these uneven paths of shifting reality, your hands in mine, holding…" Beautifully penned. Thank you so much for participating at Poems in April at Real Toads.❤️<br /><br /><br />Lots of love,<br />SanaaSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-14449112874204731142017-04-21T18:01:04.395+05:302017-04-21T18:01:04.395+05:30Every night fragmenting... like that!!!!Every night fragmenting... like that!!!!Thotpurgehttp://thotpurge.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com