tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post5424678333228828654..comments2023-10-28T16:37:02.800+05:30Comments on writing on just to write..........: The clock ticks.Sreejahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-3318068518945202852012-08-21T21:00:00.844+05:302012-08-21T21:00:00.844+05:30Thank you Amrit.....Thank you Amrit.....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-21578386553447123622012-08-21T20:59:36.760+05:302012-08-21T20:59:36.760+05:30Thank you so much.....Thank you so much.....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-14961087267132412572012-08-21T15:49:32.689+05:302012-08-21T15:49:32.689+05:30A really beautiful piece ... quite intriguing and ...A really beautiful piece ... quite intriguing and absorbing ... I flowed along with the words ... well done Sreeja :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-27255448821328188802012-08-21T10:52:42.030+05:302012-08-21T10:52:42.030+05:30powerful! and i love the repetition at the beginni...powerful! and i love the repetition at the beginning/end!<br /><br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-23555347798218834262012-08-21T09:55:22.020+05:302012-08-21T09:55:22.020+05:30Thank you so much.....I wish if we could make litt...Thank you so much.....I wish if we could make little hopeful changes .....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-27280843030672386092012-08-21T09:50:16.641+05:302012-08-21T09:50:16.641+05:30Thank you so much....Thank you so much....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-86848943472208158782012-08-21T09:49:49.234+05:302012-08-21T09:49:49.234+05:30Thank you so much.....yup only hope can put us acr...Thank you so much.....yup only hope can put us across....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-32830513673123521702012-08-21T09:49:07.333+05:302012-08-21T09:49:07.333+05:30Ha Susan you always bring out all aspects of the w...Ha Susan you always bring out all aspects of the writing...thank you so much....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-63796330060819366342012-08-21T09:47:56.135+05:302012-08-21T09:47:56.135+05:30Thank you so much....Thank you so much....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-6064892508193579302012-08-21T09:47:36.026+05:302012-08-21T09:47:36.026+05:30Thank you so much for being here.....its time wast...Thank you so much for being here.....its time wasted and gifts from God wasted....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-63029731080762801632012-08-21T08:07:00.218+05:302012-08-21T08:07:00.218+05:30The hopelessness of the future stares bleakly out ...The hopelessness of the future stares bleakly out of this piece. Wherever we are in the world we see "progress" destroying peoples lives and the call for help is crushed by the need for profit. I was quite moved by it.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-88314960152750551522012-08-21T05:34:02.354+05:302012-08-21T05:34:02.354+05:30I echo fireblossom's comments - I like the fra...I echo fireblossom's comments - I like the fractured wordplay - like a series of thoughts, seemingly disconnected, but tied together with an underlying theme.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-9035153362785247012012-08-21T04:54:33.488+05:302012-08-21T04:54:33.488+05:30A nice flow and a nice yearning. There is certainl...A nice flow and a nice yearning. There is certainly hope at the end of the tunnel! Nice write, sreeja!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-54982196145472956202012-08-21T02:33:44.636+05:302012-08-21T02:33:44.636+05:30But no, there is duty calling, black and white.
No...But no, there is duty calling, black and white.<br />None I explored, my duties calling, black and white.<br />None I explored, nor did my children, they are poor,<br /><br />SO much color and wealth and culture we read about, but not for the children there, not for the mother who must walk a narrow path to survive. Only for tourists, the rich, and the scholars?<br /><br />Is there truly no escape?Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-18907877558148945782012-08-21T01:52:21.480+05:302012-08-21T01:52:21.480+05:30It does remind me Jazz..there are frantic notes th...It does remind me Jazz..there are frantic notes that feel discordant, but they move through you..make you feel the piece. Fantastic work!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-40274600812437015702012-08-20T22:10:05.580+05:302012-08-20T22:10:05.580+05:30Sad and painful, but a beautiful expression of... ...Sad and painful, but a beautiful expression of... I'm not sure but I think it feels like a lament for time wasted, and now it's too late.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-38448006042467360462012-08-20T21:08:13.480+05:302012-08-20T21:08:13.480+05:30Oh I am honored...thank you so much...Oh I am honored...thank you so much...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-50221190563867583362012-08-20T21:07:40.020+05:302012-08-20T21:07:40.020+05:30Thank you so much Varsha...Thank you so much Varsha...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-47602037115426635702012-08-20T20:49:07.266+05:302012-08-20T20:49:07.266+05:30Sad, beautiful, and poignant. You have a new follo...Sad, beautiful, and poignant. You have a new follower!Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-65366036343367392912012-08-20T19:28:14.031+05:302012-08-20T19:28:14.031+05:30It's very nice to read out loud, there's a...It's very nice to read out loud, there's a flow to your words. New follower :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17245199686136573125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-18482637904326664442012-08-20T18:12:20.306+05:302012-08-20T18:12:20.306+05:30Thank you so much...sometimes the thoughts go thei...Thank you so much...sometimes the thoughts go their way carrying the words with them.... Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-34350512993676231912012-08-20T18:06:07.013+05:302012-08-20T18:06:07.013+05:30The syntax is a little fractured at times, but it ...The syntax is a little fractured at times, but it ends up reading like a jazz piece is heard; it isn't conventional, but within that unconventionality lies a power that begins to carry one along, until, by the time one reads the repeated three lines at the end, one goes "wow!" and claps hard.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.com