tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post6489077529574459252..comments2023-10-28T16:37:02.800+05:30Comments on writing on just to write..........: ...returning to rivers...Sreejahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-37589846985702031992017-03-24T09:03:22.056+05:302017-03-24T09:03:22.056+05:30thank you all ...<3thank you all ...<3Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-60482793672748511722017-03-23T22:11:28.931+05:302017-03-23T22:11:28.931+05:30We are like pollen and gale
We tumble a lot and ga...We are like pollen and gale<br />We tumble a lot and gather piles<br />Of dead and tender leaves of life, infinite<br /><br />Very true Sreeja! We are all open to external forces impacting on our lives. In the process our efforts were spent on warding them off. They were not being beneficial most times.<br /><br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-8354187562646474932017-03-23T12:30:00.883+05:302017-03-23T12:30:00.883+05:30in this write i hear the river running, it is joyf...in this write i hear the river running, it is joyful laughter. Lovely poem.erbiage.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16613166276535753765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-34913269160202132432017-03-23T06:06:05.326+05:302017-03-23T06:06:05.326+05:30Marvelously expressed. Even as the river flows...Marvelously expressed. Even as the river flows...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-87494137964030100622017-03-23T04:14:43.564+05:302017-03-23T04:14:43.564+05:30This is beautiful poem with so much in it.This is beautiful poem with so much in it.Cedarwindhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18038049847097780128noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-58765611707309105252017-03-23T03:16:40.896+05:302017-03-23T03:16:40.896+05:30This is wonderfully deep and meditative ❤️This is wonderfully deep and meditative ❤️Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-41081137415341508222017-03-23T02:25:05.486+05:302017-03-23T02:25:05.486+05:30To be the river does describe so well the differen...To be the river does describe so well the different ways you are... love the revival in your poembrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-23914330650245714882017-03-23T02:11:33.906+05:302017-03-23T02:11:33.906+05:30the river does carry a lot of things with it on it...the river does carry a lot of things with it on its flow and I loved reading how you let some of it be absorbed into your days on the days you needed to feel it uncut in your soul. I imagine traveling though life somehow, allowing experiences to be absorbed into our lives, living other's and our own too. the river of life seems a strong force in yours. so well writtenGinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11492243429734804802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-71304090190388280502017-03-22T21:26:08.017+05:302017-03-22T21:26:08.017+05:30awww this is a lovely poem :)awww this is a lovely poem :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-41737037277252835172017-03-22T21:20:25.011+05:302017-03-22T21:20:25.011+05:30I like the metaphor too of that river being us~ T...I like the metaphor too of that river being us~ This part is very inspiring to read:<br /><br />I have got a river inside me<br />Now for days I will be rich as a tree<br />Deep as an ocean and will regret nothingGracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-36329033132240433682017-03-22T21:07:57.393+05:302017-03-22T21:07:57.393+05:30Nice comparison between the days when one has shut...Nice comparison between the days when one has shut oneself up drinking or pouring a river and those other days when one has the river flowing already inside one perhaps thanks to those shut up days.Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-89757537429231118562017-03-22T20:42:13.135+05:302017-03-22T20:42:13.135+05:30Oh so happy you liked it...
Well, maybe wild gra...Oh so happy you liked it...<br /><br /><br />Well, maybe wild grass....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-80651928263536208202017-03-22T20:40:59.958+05:302017-03-22T20:40:59.958+05:30Thank you so much...the sound itself is healing. ....Thank you so much...the sound itself is healing. ...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-64869478280821827802017-03-22T20:37:25.780+05:302017-03-22T20:37:25.780+05:30Oh! Me too. I am just learning that doing so is ...Oh! Me too. I am just learning that doing so is better than depression, and returning from the river requires no added healing, as it is health itself. "Now for days I will be rich as a tree."<br /><br />Why do some paths get lost between uses? <br />Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-3512139347010254582017-03-22T20:01:45.778+05:302017-03-22T20:01:45.778+05:30This is a well put together piece about how to be ...This is a well put together piece about how to be nourishing to one's self. To allow the river inside to grow and to heal.Thanks for bringing your poem to the collective River.Paul John Dearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08976172444697072142noreply@blogger.com