tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post6758844233771820376..comments2023-10-28T16:37:02.800+05:30Comments on writing on just to write..........: transitionsSreejahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-51343496112583055362017-07-22T00:21:33.543+05:302017-07-22T00:21:33.543+05:30i mask my scorching thoughts with smiles
i save my...i mask my scorching thoughts with smiles<br />i save my rain on brushes and paints<br />it dries up so quick;<br />it’s the hesitation to cross over to the rain,<br />for I have my own masks<br /><br />This is gorgeous!! Beautifully penned.Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-39401045450546694362017-07-21T10:26:24.070+05:302017-07-21T10:26:24.070+05:30So much love from all the comments....thank you al...So much love from all the comments....thank you all!Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-51122538657532194732017-07-21T06:09:08.368+05:302017-07-21T06:09:08.368+05:30it’s the hesitation to touch wet words,... love th...it’s the hesitation to touch wet words,... love the line..beautiful poem. Thotpurgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09729170517164200003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-87952185122976733422017-07-21T05:24:59.693+05:302017-07-21T05:24:59.693+05:30This is so elegant. I love the flow of the metapho...This is so elegant. I love the flow of the metaphors,Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-81594993444750924382017-07-21T00:19:33.594+05:302017-07-21T00:19:33.594+05:30This is very beautiful. You wove two prompts very ...This is very beautiful. You wove two prompts very magically. Beautiful imagery! I love this one.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-8045010466066178252017-07-20T23:55:49.248+05:302017-07-20T23:55:49.248+05:30Wow! I just held my breath reading this beautiful ...Wow! I just held my breath reading this beautiful metaphoric write. I love all the deeper layers, the wet-on-wet, the gorgeous imagery. One of your best, ever, Sreeja.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-1524272198383635312017-07-20T23:44:21.246+05:302017-07-20T23:44:21.246+05:30I love your opening line! So much to savor and en...I love your opening line! So much to savor and enjoy in this poem. The picture is perfect for this poem.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-5865410023134536642017-07-20T23:22:30.175+05:302017-07-20T23:22:30.175+05:30Masking scorching thoughts with smiles......I can ...Masking scorching thoughts with smiles......I can picture this. It is something many of us humans do....either accidentally or purposefully. I enjoyed your write, and the picture you chose compliments your poem very well.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-86707300698085195512017-07-20T22:25:42.648+05:302017-07-20T22:25:42.648+05:30I liked the phrase "drenched words with strea...I liked the phrase "drenched words with streaks of sun". I usually think of words being dry and the sun hiding streaks. This flips things around for me.Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-30299840035976086632017-07-20T21:39:46.500+05:302017-07-20T21:39:46.500+05:30This is amazing! I love how you turned that photo ...This is amazing! I love how you turned that photo of the rain-covered window into a deeply personal reflection. Thank you for posting. Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09054732378669659210noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-69197715519241370562017-07-20T21:27:07.944+05:302017-07-20T21:27:07.944+05:30"I untied my yesterdays". What a lead-i..."I untied my yesterdays". What a lead-in! Great write.indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-66361461258256471582017-07-20T20:01:23.135+05:302017-07-20T20:01:23.135+05:30Love everything about this....and most especially ...Love everything about this....and most especially the "circle back" from the first line to the last two lines. Beautifully writ! Thank you so much for posting to the prompt. <br />...and oh yes....we all have masks and moments of hesitation. lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-21506636171698893322017-07-20T18:08:15.646+05:302017-07-20T18:08:15.646+05:30Aren't we all hesitating and doubtful; hence t...Aren't we all hesitating and doubtful; hence the masks? I love this part:<br /><br />it’s the hesitation to touch wet words,<br />to get wet; the window bridges,<br />it bridges the wet and the dry,<br />it’s the hesitation to cross over to the rain, Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-36361508674567134952017-07-20T17:59:02.767+05:302017-07-20T17:59:02.767+05:30Wow. I love Yesterdays as curtains that help mask...Wow. I love Yesterdays as curtains that help mask us at windows and in our arts. Love the wet and dry. And the whole approach idea of needing help with transition. It is always an extra treat to see you here, Sreeja.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-61238167229282529572017-07-20T17:54:27.212+05:302017-07-20T17:54:27.212+05:30Beautiful poem, Sreeja! Classic, to say the least....Beautiful poem, Sreeja! Classic, to say the least...<br />Personally, I see the masks as nothing more than mental holdings that are formed by our own perceptions and experiences. Your mind carries a beautiful paint-brush. :) Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-86090955368407962932017-07-20T17:18:04.181+05:302017-07-20T17:18:04.181+05:30This is so beautifully done Sreeja, I love the mir...This is so beautifully done Sreeja, I love the mirror of your canvas as a window :o) xxxXeniahttp://www.whippetwisdom.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-10145588484179752812017-07-20T12:05:29.291+05:302017-07-20T12:05:29.291+05:30Wow Sreeja! Bridging two prompts with such beautif...Wow Sreeja! Bridging two prompts with such beautiful words. Among many of my favorites here I choose "at the window i untie my masks"...So beautifully done...<br />Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-47472134683960366592017-07-20T11:42:42.835+05:302017-07-20T11:42:42.835+05:30I love your opening line! It's hard to see out...I love your opening line! It's hard to see out some windows..better to wait until it becomes more clear so you can decide then what to do. :-)Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.com