tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post7304233944282426241..comments2023-10-28T16:37:02.800+05:30Comments on writing on just to write..........: Caught betweenSreejahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-18069294118407633432012-09-09T20:00:47.481+05:302012-09-09T20:00:47.481+05:30Hello.
These are some great lines! Nice imagery an...Hello.<br />These are some great lines! Nice imagery and flow. Love purple..it's at the top of my favorite colors. Very nicely done Sreeja! Thanks for sharing and visiting.<br /><br /><a href="http://thoughtsofbeautyinthestillnessofdawn.blogspot.com/2012/09/this-plunderous-world.html#.UEynuY2PX-A" rel="nofollow">This Plunderous World</a>The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-86451525319556788692012-09-09T18:55:46.021+05:302012-09-09T18:55:46.021+05:30I love the line "with passions to fight injus...I love the line "with passions to fight injustice" along with so many here. I would probably have to reprint just about every line. So much emotion about one night and the colors red and purple. It just reminds me about a beautiful sunset.<br /><br />Thank you for sharing this exquisite poem with us for this weeks Temptation Theme Thursday.<br /><br />God bless. Mrsupolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01563854387767106508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-45138262001157917622012-09-06T23:09:44.531+05:302012-09-06T23:09:44.531+05:30Feelings can be magical sometimes....you have capt...Feelings can be magical sometimes....you have captured that here Sreeja....this is beautiful! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-19258167779275341042012-09-06T19:49:22.771+05:302012-09-06T19:49:22.771+05:30Oh thank you Bren....you are always such a good su...Oh thank you Bren....you are always such a good support.....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-16739586267724483802012-09-06T16:41:21.629+05:302012-09-06T16:41:21.629+05:30Some great lines in this. 'Fermented fancies&#...Some great lines in this. 'Fermented fancies' and<br />'why then this red lines are screeching loud<br />sending persistent ants over slumbering veins'<br />and caught between red and purple is a great line too.<br />You have woven this in such a clever way it could be about growing up but also about being on the cusp of changing seasons too.<br />This is one of you best yet Sreeja. Beautiful.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-76151460726080136112012-09-06T14:05:53.994+05:302012-09-06T14:05:53.994+05:30and so i admire you for being such an honest perso...and so i admire you for being such an honest person....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-77257692494449698142012-09-06T14:04:00.346+05:302012-09-06T14:04:00.346+05:30thank you so much.....thank you so much.....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-6657891747441933602012-09-06T14:03:34.504+05:302012-09-06T14:03:34.504+05:30thank you so much for being here as a great suppor...thank you so much for being here as a great support....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-55164507011532933632012-09-06T13:10:54.929+05:302012-09-06T13:10:54.929+05:30Red and purple.... Reality and emotions laced wi...Red and purple.... Reality and emotions laced with fantacy? I wish the later, its truly rich and worth living. Sneha ramesh Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16606611983895307699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-68846381259908575112012-09-06T13:07:51.060+05:302012-09-06T13:07:51.060+05:30Red and purple...... Reality and emotions? Wishe...Red and purple...... Reality and emotions? Wished that purple to be the life......... So rich and worth living...... Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16606611983895307699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-71445149582984336302012-09-06T02:27:40.633+05:302012-09-06T02:27:40.633+05:30I especially like your ending...caught between red...I especially like your ending...caught between red and purple...very nice...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-15260853128522106412012-09-05T18:29:57.957+05:302012-09-05T18:29:57.957+05:30Some haunts are welcome. Some of my welcome haunt...Some haunts are welcome. Some of my welcome haunts have actually passed on, and I do revisit their places because it is better than nothing . . . much better. But I think those are the ones that I had definitely not compromised on in any way. Happy memories with sad ends.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-37508750887124407892012-09-05T15:59:22.070+05:302012-09-05T15:59:22.070+05:30Thank you so much Helen.....Thank you so much Helen.....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-90557659599897207272012-09-05T15:58:56.977+05:302012-09-05T15:58:56.977+05:30Thank you so much panchaliji.....Thank you so much panchaliji.....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-49100113100866984192012-09-05T15:58:22.869+05:302012-09-05T15:58:22.869+05:30thank you so much....it is encouraging.....thank you so much....it is encouraging.....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-24750739582160832932012-09-05T15:56:56.201+05:302012-09-05T15:56:56.201+05:30Thank you so much...yea truly of becoming.....Thank you so much...yea truly of becoming.....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-30725355956313533592012-09-05T15:56:17.004+05:302012-09-05T15:56:17.004+05:30Thank you Susan....on the way of becoming, there a...Thank you Susan....on the way of becoming, there are many things we compromise on.........but they will haunt us if we still have that true heart.....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-79766931901213191272012-09-05T15:53:31.278+05:302012-09-05T15:53:31.278+05:30Thank you so much.....Thank you so much.....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-61352579984283596792012-09-05T15:52:48.037+05:302012-09-05T15:52:48.037+05:30Thank you so much Brian....thats the real dilemma....Thank you so much Brian....thats the real dilemma..Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-42327592211796940192012-09-05T15:51:55.754+05:302012-09-05T15:51:55.754+05:30thank you....thank you....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-21027918007995018482012-09-04T21:42:11.203+05:302012-09-04T21:42:11.203+05:30Masterful job of combining these three prompts ......Masterful job of combining these three prompts ... yes, summer is too short - caught between red and purple a great descriptive.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-9545201074490565182012-09-04T21:17:31.239+05:302012-09-04T21:17:31.239+05:30Such colourful images and intoxicating words ~ bea...Such colourful images and intoxicating words ~ beautiful...Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-81136011060713543932012-09-04T19:44:39.283+05:302012-09-04T19:44:39.283+05:30Brilliant choice of words:)
ah,the words surely gi...Brilliant choice of words:)<br />ah,the words surely give me lovely feel.<br />The letters though speak much more to me than just old papers:)Kinara :)https://www.blogger.com/profile/13621480580426215254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-90659960334709938072012-09-04T17:35:56.237+05:302012-09-04T17:35:56.237+05:30Great stuff, Sreeja, i felt this image was a state...Great stuff, Sreeja, i felt this image was a state of being, yet after reading your work i feel it is dedinitely more a state of becoming, thanks Silent Otto https://www.blogger.com/profile/00475494332523156366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-76666472594613574302012-09-04T17:35:12.242+05:302012-09-04T17:35:12.242+05:30"As the day hesitated to part;
clinging back ... "As the day hesitated to part;<br />clinging back still with purplish presence . . ."<br /><br />WOW<br /><br />" this night will pass soon<br />the letter is so silly old paper<br />with passions to fight injustice"<br /><br />I am not sure. The past and present are written in the landscape of now and then:<br /><br />"why then this red lines are screeching loud<br />sending persistent ants over slumbering veins"<br /><br />Every single line here is painfully gorgeous and true! I would never go back! I like more restfulness now in my life.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.com