tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post7548311608633908643..comments2023-10-28T16:37:02.800+05:30Comments on writing on just to write..........: Saline dreams...Sreejahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-4209564025167251902016-03-10T04:32:38.405+05:302016-03-10T04:32:38.405+05:30Nature sinGs Truth..
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...Nature sinGs Truth..<br />Life's SonG iN <br />liGht oF<br />sparKle<br />waVe<br />sunliT<br />oceaN way..<br />no borders.. no<br />shores etched in stone..<br />manmade.. prisons<br />fail<br />test<br />iN ocean free<br />waves Of uS<br />brusH<br />new shoreline<br />Free from <br />StOne agE PriSons..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-61437734543055294322016-03-04T10:01:17.846+05:302016-03-04T10:01:17.846+05:30"We are more eyes and mouth than ears,
and yo..."We are more eyes and mouth than ears,<br />and your stories are syllables of life."....only if we would listen...Every word of this wonderful poem is filled with intense feeling...<br />Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-68422796653237848412016-03-03T09:53:46.048+05:302016-03-03T09:53:46.048+05:30I am glad you touched the chord...thank you so muc...I am glad you touched the chord...thank you so much!Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-70360960256254031972016-03-03T09:52:00.190+05:302016-03-03T09:52:00.190+05:30Thank you...!Thank you...!Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-68784120729450463812016-03-03T09:51:16.832+05:302016-03-03T09:51:16.832+05:30Thank you Margaret...true, it's therapeutic!Thank you Margaret...true, it's therapeutic!Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-41386533759675978672016-03-03T09:50:30.419+05:302016-03-03T09:50:30.419+05:30Thank you so much..!Thank you so much..!Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-90839115477522453302016-03-03T09:50:03.033+05:302016-03-03T09:50:03.033+05:30Thank you...!Thank you...!Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-90802597915474223342016-03-03T09:49:48.199+05:302016-03-03T09:49:48.199+05:30Thank you...maybe when man destroys everything, we...Thank you...maybe when man destroys everything, we all will come back as mermaids... :-)Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-30147661815963777542016-03-03T09:48:06.966+05:302016-03-03T09:48:06.966+05:30Thank you so much..!Thank you so much..!Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-31478622077535694472016-03-03T09:47:03.717+05:302016-03-03T09:47:03.717+05:30Thank you...so true..!Thank you...so true..!Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-52496233871289306152016-03-03T09:46:42.120+05:302016-03-03T09:46:42.120+05:30Thank you....yea, if we could while we walk on ear...Thank you....yea, if we could while we walk on earth...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-62523590027538187512016-03-03T09:45:20.174+05:302016-03-03T09:45:20.174+05:30Yup our journey is mysterious....yet there are peo...Yup our journey is mysterious....yet there are people who end up dividing and diminishing the very truth of nature...instead of living through this blessing...thank you so much Grace!Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-10657305518840592012016-03-03T09:42:51.845+05:302016-03-03T09:42:51.845+05:30Thank you so much....Thank you so much....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-46495756875858067952016-03-03T08:47:37.129+05:302016-03-03T08:47:37.129+05:30To me this speaks of our beginnings, as we are mad...To me this speaks of our beginnings, as we are made of the "ocean" in our similarities of salinity. It has an ancient and tribal feel to it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-20142168917883347522016-03-03T06:42:36.559+05:302016-03-03T06:42:36.559+05:30Beautiful poem !Beautiful poem !ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-56464460817599918772016-03-03T04:37:46.711+05:302016-03-03T04:37:46.711+05:30I agree - the last stanza is lovely. The ocean an...I agree - the last stanza is lovely. The ocean and water in general is therapeutic - the sound, the image, the feel of it. Beautiful poem. Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-26066896526554999922016-03-03T03:22:53.212+05:302016-03-03T03:22:53.212+05:30"At night the songs of your people haunt
And ..."At night the songs of your people haunt<br />And the moon dances in your waves;<br />Your saline stories are seeping in<br />Through earth, spreading" amazing<br />Debi Swimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08255928985823418669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-89613509083734529332016-03-03T00:44:35.887+05:302016-03-03T00:44:35.887+05:30Wonderful. Very nicely crafted.Wonderful. Very nicely crafted.Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-1265408603229383872016-03-03T00:24:45.041+05:302016-03-03T00:24:45.041+05:30Wonderful. We all are children of the sea. the l...Wonderful. We all are children of the sea. the last stanza is incredible.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-60355375726704839992016-03-02T21:47:20.871+05:302016-03-02T21:47:20.871+05:30This is more salty than spicy but so interesting w...This is more salty than spicy but so interesting with that bite of the sea and the eternal nature of the ocean. Wow!Georginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01463869349871241765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-76663411917439448212016-03-02T21:39:21.576+05:302016-03-02T21:39:21.576+05:30Oh I love the the though of saline.. it's what...Oh I love the the though of saline.. it's what we have in common.... we carry sea inside us...brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-46147664301370447962016-03-02T19:52:41.933+05:302016-03-02T19:52:41.933+05:30"Where my legs taste eternity..." Awesom..."Where my legs taste eternity..." Awesome!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-60239556866123364982016-03-02T18:27:20.134+05:302016-03-02T18:27:20.134+05:30A very mysterious journey weaving with nature ~ M...A very mysterious journey weaving with nature ~ My favorite is the last stanza ~ <br /><br />At night the songs of your people haunt<br />And the moon dances in your waves;<br />Your saline stories are seeping in<br />Through earth, spreadingGracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052765242514425876.post-15935051952464300772016-03-02T14:23:26.129+05:302016-03-02T14:23:26.129+05:30And the moon dances in your waves;
Your saline sto...And the moon dances in your waves;<br />Your saline stories are seeping in<br />Through earth, spreading,<br />Desperate to be heard<br /><br />Such beautiful lines Sreeja, no doubt the ocean acts as a witness to stories when we opt to share our woes and dreams. Beautifully penned. Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights :D<br /><br />Lots of love,<br />SanaaSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.com