Surging rainbow dreams nest-
ing bosom, the common mob, wailing,
as rain drops splatt-
ed, mourning seven colored dreams.
Bottlenecked sunshine, bureaucracy,
shout-
ed thundering mockery
from behind lust-
ful dark clouds.
Yearning for sun the rain,
dripping, mourning seven colored
dreams.
Bottlenecked sunshine... love that. Thanks for participating, Sreeja.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much.....
ReplyDeleteYou have used some wonderful words and concepts there, Sreeja.
ReplyDeleteSuch great imagery here!
ReplyDeleteLike Laurie I loved the idea of bottlenecked sunshine!
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ReplyDeletedripping, mourning seven colored dreams." - Great line !!!
I too love bottlenecked sunshine...what a creative expression
ReplyDeleteWhat gorgeous imagery! Love the phrase "mourning seven colored dreams," that will stick with me for quite some time.
ReplyDeleteThanks to the prompt that created the images.....happy to have everybody here.....:-)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I love your play on words, 7 colored dreams...magical!
ReplyDeleteoooooh! love the seven colored dreams! i agree with Ella ~ magical!
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I do like 'bottlenecked sunshine.' So often when the sun hides behind the clouds for days it really DOES seem bottlenecked! Another nice write, Sreeja.
ReplyDeleteThe angst seeps off the page, here. Emotional and concise. Well done.
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I love the repetition of "mourning seven colored dreams". Beautiful writing!
ReplyDelete". . . thundering mockery
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ful dark clouds."
I feel it all rolling toward and then over the top, I feel the relaxation just beyond. Incredible!
Nicely done, with the repetition of "mourning seven colored dreams"!
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Beautiful words and expressions used to express some tough concepts here...the word mourning really stands alone to me. Well written, Sreeja.
ReplyDeleteI too like the "seven coloured dreams". (For spelling, I am writing in Canada, where we put a "u" in colour!!!!)
ReplyDeletePowerful emotions here!
ReplyDeletePowerful emotions here!
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