I am in love
Do
you see my eyes?
Dancing
grasses, thousand blooming buds
And do you see my eyes
Flying
whales and birds
Over
silken sea of blue
I
am in love
Do
you see my eyes?
Smiling
faces
Playing
notes on violin
And
do you see my eyes?
Flowing
streams and
Kissing
clouds on mountains
Can
you tune in here?
And
love the life
The
simple life
Splashing
water
Dancing
rainbow
And
even chocolates
Hold
the magic.
I
am in love
Do
you see my eyes?
Hand
in hand
Dancing
steps
We
can change the world
A simple
life
On
rags or riches
Smiles
can win
And
roads will open
Do
you see my eyes?
I am
in love
Just
one touch with the truth
Can
you see the soul
And
be in love?
And
see the world smiling
And be in love
Always....
Smiles can win
ReplyDeleteAnd roads will open.....so lovely
Lovely rhythm, Sreeja.
ReplyDeleteThese lines were really good,
"I am in love
Just one touch with the truth
Can you see the soul
And be in love?" :)
Full of so much energy... I especially like the last 5 lines...
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful. Yes, the eyes always tell the truth, don't they? A person can tell so much by looking at the eyes of another person. And yes, one can definitely see LOVE! This is such a joyful poem.
ReplyDeleteit is a beautiful thing, the love of life...flying whales...smiles...i love that...to be in love def colors the world surreal...smiles. stay in love...
ReplyDeletesmiles...love surely makes the eyes shine bright...now go and dance with that rainbow...smiles
ReplyDeleteYou surely are in love :-)
ReplyDeleteI love the rhythm of your words and refraining lines:
ReplyDeleteI am in love
Do you see my eyes?
The beauty of love...it does show in the eyes. I love the repetition of the phrases "I am in love Do you see it in my eyes?
ReplyDeletebeautiful. love the smile
ReplyDeletebeautifully written, flows so sweepingly, just like love itself. Great write. Thanks
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