Wednesday, 16 January 2013

I am in love


                                              I am in love
Do you see my eyes?
Dancing grasses, thousand blooming buds
 And do you see my eyes
Flying whales and birds
Over silken sea of blue
I am in love
Do you see my eyes?
Smiling faces
Playing notes on violin
And do you see my eyes?
Flowing streams and  
Kissing clouds on mountains
Can you tune in here?
And love the life
The simple life
Splashing water
Dancing rainbow
And even chocolates
Hold the magic.
I am in love
Do you see my eyes?
Hand in hand
Dancing steps
We can change the world
A simple life
On rags or riches
Smiles can win
And roads will open
Do you see my eyes?
I am in love
Just one touch with the truth
Can you see the soul
And be in love?
And see the world smiling
 And be in love
Always....

12 comments:

  1. Smiles can win
    And roads will open.....so lovely

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  2. Lovely rhythm, Sreeja.

    These lines were really good,
    "I am in love
    Just one touch with the truth
    Can you see the soul
    And be in love?" :)

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  3. Full of so much energy... I especially like the last 5 lines...

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  4. This is beautiful. Yes, the eyes always tell the truth, don't they? A person can tell so much by looking at the eyes of another person. And yes, one can definitely see LOVE! This is such a joyful poem.

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  5. it is a beautiful thing, the love of life...flying whales...smiles...i love that...to be in love def colors the world surreal...smiles. stay in love...

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  6. smiles...love surely makes the eyes shine bright...now go and dance with that rainbow...smiles

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  7. I love the rhythm of your words and refraining lines:

    I am in love
    Do you see my eyes?

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  8. The beauty of love...it does show in the eyes. I love the repetition of the phrases "I am in love Do you see it in my eyes?

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  9. What a beautiful and uplifting poem! :)

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  10. beautifully written, flows so sweepingly, just like love itself. Great write. Thanks

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