Wednesday, 23 November 2016

...a try at Tan Renga...


Picture courtesy Google


on a bare branch
a crow lands
autumn dusk
alone moon strides
with my numb limbs


Visit CDHK to know more...the first three lines are a famous haiku master's, last two mine.

3 comments:

  1. Intriguing ending, and I like that it is intriguing...

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  2. Intriguing ending, and I like that it is intriguing...

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  3. numb limbs... asks the question for sure! Nicely done.

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