Friday 6 June 2014

cup of love with void words

moon wandered in sky with dark patches—
untold words and dried out tears

from a far of land do you see my dear
the dark patches, the voidness;
above the barren land, moon shone
like a cup of love untouched—

words won’t bring you my heart
for that ocean only eyes could hold,
when moonlight brings a sheen,
dear, you hold it close, for it’s so far
yet so near when love flows
from heart to heart…

moon wandered in sky with dark patches—

stained with lonely heart’s void words.

12 comments:

  1. when love flows heart to heart, are words really needed?
    they are a nice reassurance, of what we feel...
    that is more than words

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  2. Oh, I do so think that the moon can resonate with so many different emotions. I like the part about love flowing heart to heart. I am sure the moon senses this as well! Smiles.

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  3. Oh so true.. I love how you used the moon here ..

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  4. Cup of love untouched - Such sadness ~ I specially love the ending verses ~

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  5. A great array of emotions and images in your poem!

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  6. nice vivid images here! i like how you chose the moon as the backdrop....so surreal and the beauty evoked in that silence

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  7. vivid and full of heart breaking emotion, this really paints a colorful image of love.

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  8. true - words are not enough to convey love. Beautiful images here.

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  9. Endless possibilities exist when that moon I shining brightly, no cloud cover allowed ...

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  10. The moon is a commonality all people share even when they are far apart. Hence it represents a shared sentiment, while often (at the same time) intensifying our feeling of aloneness. Your choice of pinning your poem against the image of the moon is perfect.

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  11. That's a wonderful one...full of emotions..:)

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