moon wandered in sky
with dark patches—
untold words and
dried out tears
from a far of land do
you see my dear
the dark patches, the
voidness;
above the barren land,
moon shone
like a cup of love
untouched—
words won’t bring you
my heart
for that ocean only
eyes could hold,
when moonlight brings
a sheen,
dear, you hold it
close, for it’s so far
yet so near when love
flows
from heart to heart…
moon wandered in sky
with dark patches—
stained with lonely
heart’s void words.
when love flows heart to heart, are words really needed?
ReplyDeletethey are a nice reassurance, of what we feel...
that is more than words
Oh, I do so think that the moon can resonate with so many different emotions. I like the part about love flowing heart to heart. I am sure the moon senses this as well! Smiles.
ReplyDeleteOh so true.. I love how you used the moon here ..
ReplyDeleteCup of love untouched - Such sadness ~ I specially love the ending verses ~
ReplyDeleteA great array of emotions and images in your poem!
ReplyDeletenice vivid images here! i like how you chose the moon as the backdrop....so surreal and the beauty evoked in that silence
ReplyDeletevivid and full of heart breaking emotion, this really paints a colorful image of love.
ReplyDeletetrue - words are not enough to convey love. Beautiful images here.
ReplyDeleteEndless possibilities exist when that moon I shining brightly, no cloud cover allowed ...
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DeleteThe moon is a commonality all people share even when they are far apart. Hence it represents a shared sentiment, while often (at the same time) intensifying our feeling of aloneness. Your choice of pinning your poem against the image of the moon is perfect.
ReplyDeleteThat's a wonderful one...full of emotions..:)
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