Blank, white canvass inviting
thoughts, feelings, inner- self unfolding
its music, dance, celebration beholding.
Thick and shiny paste
goes round and round on palette
bristles of brush caressing
hidden emotions in every color
sheer joy of union brimming
as colors spread over canvass
telling stories from that beating canvass
the treasure in blood red, many unseen images
strokes and styles blending depth and heights
you name
it different
but like pond, lake, river and ocean
it’s just life and life in color
captured on canvass.
Blank, white canvass inviting
thoughts, feelings, inner-self unfolding
its music, dance, celebration beholding.
Sreeja, I can tell by this poem that you are a painter, as you 'painted' the process of painting so very well with your writing! There is something very inviting about that blank white canvas, isn't there?
ReplyDeleteThank you so much..you are right...
DeleteWOW! It's great to see a poet and a painter in these lovely lines.
ReplyDeleteThick and shiny paste
goes round and round on palette
bristles of brush caressing
hidden emotions in every color
sheer joy of union brimming[I HAVE TO SAY THAT I LOVED IT.]
Keep it up!
~Vaishali
Thanks vaishali..and those are my personal favorites..thanks for this.
DeleteThis is lovely! Life is like a blank canvas waiting to be painted.
ReplyDeleteThanks....straight from heart is always lovely...I think.
DeleteLife in colour on a canvas....it's wonderful how we can also somewhat 'paint' our own lives isn't it!
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely word painting
Thank you so much...its a great feeling to paint...
DeleteYes! Your poem lovingly, exactly shares the way a painter feels. Your words do both arts justice.
ReplyDeletehttp://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2012/05/30/it-takes-an-artist/
Thanks Kim...
DeleteI can relate to this -- the colors and rhythm of life on the blank canvas. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteThank you....Its good feeling to meet people who can feel our way...
DeleteOh how I wish I had the ability to be creative on canvas! Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThanks....just put your wish on canvass....its our happiness nothing to be judged....
DeleteBeautifully written...!!
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Thanks for the visit gauthami....I always enjoyed your poems...
Deletethis is exquisite! it's been too long since i've faced a blank canvas! the beginning/ending stanza is absolutely stunning!
ReplyDeletethank you for participating at Poetry Jam!
♥
dani
my heart's love songs
Your first and last verses, weaved a wonderful message ~ celebrate life ~ Cheers ~
ReplyDeletenice exposition on being creative and painting as well...so many metaphors come to mind in painting and life...i like to paint on occassion myself...lovely verse...
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poem of art in so many ways. Lovely thoughts about that blank canvas and every day we get to paint (or write) it all over again...in our own colors.
ReplyDeleteI always see so many similarities between painting and poetry...after all, a blank page is just another kind of canvas waiting to be filled. Beautifully captured!
ReplyDeleteI love that you have encompassed all art in one. It is what the eye sees when the third is open. Very lovely.
ReplyDeleteYes, you are a painter! The canvas of your poem swirls with color.
ReplyDeleteI love how you begin and end with the same verse. I have done some posts the same. You describe your love of color and it touches my heart as I am an artist and color is what makes my world a better place.
ReplyDeleteThis ia really nice Sreeja!:)
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