Monday, 18 June 2012

Pride rediscovered.


The snakes of yesteryears’ memories crawling around,
winding me, cheating me, of my happiness today.
My heart torn apart, bleeding,
arrows of second thoughts piercing deep,
every action amounting to riots,
no I am not a rebel,
just, that my heart is passionate,
in every deed I perform,
my heart was hurt,
when you criticized.
But this evening,
with beautiful verses in hand,
I realize,
if passion meets wisdom,
action meets maturity,
its paradise.
My pride is in my humility, now I know.

This post is part of the contest Ten words to a Story(or Poem).. on WriteUpCafe.com

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18 comments:

  1. Shalu Sharma18 June 2012 at 12:45

    Very nice and sweet poem.

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  2. Amrit Sinha18 June 2012 at 15:57

    Nicely written

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  3. Viyoma18 June 2012 at 18:29

    “if passion meets wisdom, action meets maturity “ Wow – just love this line.
    It started on a sober note, ended it very positively - Like the spirit.

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  4. Viyoma18 June 2012 at 18:29

    “if passion meets wisdom, action meets maturity “ Wow – just love this line.
    It started on a sober note, ended it very positively - Like the spirit.

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    1. Sreeja19 June 2012 at 09:29

      Thank you so much....writing those words gave me a little more maturity....I think....lol...:-)

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  5. Vaishali Jain19 June 2012 at 03:03

    You've included all words, Sreeja. Somehow, I wasn't even looking or counting those; I was completely into your poem.

    I agree with Viyoma - “if passion meets wisdom, action meets maturity" is a beautiful line. :)

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  6. Vaishali Jain19 June 2012 at 03:04

    Your poem makes me want to go for the challenge, too. Let's see there are still two days left. :) Thanks for sharing this.

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    1. Sreeja19 June 2012 at 09:30

      Yes VJ I would like you to be there....:-)

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  7. Unknown19 June 2012 at 03:26

    Exceptional...good compilation of verse! Best of luck in the competition.

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    1. Sreeja19 June 2012 at 09:31

      Thank you Helen for the interest you shown.....thank you...

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  8. Saru Singhal19 June 2012 at 07:59

    You have used all the words very aptly and a lovely poem.

    For the coding, we can do this: Go to posts -> Edit post -> There are two options Compose and Edit HTML on top -> Click on HTML link -> Paste the code you wrote under this post there and update.

    After doing that you will see a link here, not the coding. :) When I was new even I had a tough time figuring such things.:)

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    1. Sreeja19 June 2012 at 09:32

      Thank you so much Saru....I was wondering over this....you helped me here..thank you...

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  9. Anupama K. Mazumder19 June 2012 at 09:40

    Wow,
    Indeed a more mature piece than mine. Kinda deep too.

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  10. Sreeja19 June 2012 at 09:46

    Thanks Anupama....it needs kinda deep heart to appreciate too...thank you...

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  11. JJ21 June 2012 at 02:21

    So crisp yet so very amazing. One of the best ones this competition.

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