( Snap from Jidhu Jose <http://jidhu.blogspot.in/#axzz2PPwvTm8r>)
Where I fall behind
lies grass and water, bind
together in, know not what passion blind…
fallen and in pieces, my mind
will grow as grass
and grow a thousand
times, this earth holds life unbound,
precious, let in and drench in water, calmed;
this earth holds life unbound.
smiles...very cool...nice use of repetition...all in how we look at life isnt it...and the possibilities of life unbound....
ReplyDeleteyes... thanks :-)
DeleteI liked "my mind will grow as grass and grow a thousand times". This poem had a really nice feel to it - almost fragmented, very freeflowing. Thank you for sharing.
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DeleteI love "my mind will grow as grass" Beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks Susie...
Deletefallen and in pieces, my mind
ReplyDeletewill grow as grass
Hope in the future and a life out of sorrow. I like this and the feeling of regeneration.
Thanks a lot....
Delete"my mind will grow as grass and grow a thousand
ReplyDeletetimes" This line shows the strength. Well written, Sreeja! :)
Thank you VJ...
DeleteOh, yes... love this, Sreeja.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much...
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ReplyDeleteYou are welcome Jidhu...looking forward for such super snaps...
DeleteLovely shot and beautiful words.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words and a lovely shot.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot...
DeleteLove the message in your words .......
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful, Sreeja. yes, indeed, this earth holds life unbound!
ReplyDeleteLovely ideas here--expressed well. I also like the photo. And thank you for visiting my blog!
ReplyDelete"Unbound." What a wonderful image. Your poem is just lovely!!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful piece had a lovely meditative quality
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