Love your "Bohemian Heart," Sreeja. And yes, it's fine to write "happpy," because it reflects that extra something in your heart that made you write it down in the first place. Peace, Amy
Really love the feeling of freedom you give in this poem!!
Thanks for commenting on my poem today. I am looking for a more current poem than this one, but don't find one. I always like to see you around the blogosphere!
Thanks a lot Mary....something or other always kept me away from my pen.....was feeling so sad about it....trying to start once more.....thank you so much!
"They are free like clouds on sky"
ReplyDeleteJust 'the way it goes', Sreeja. Interesting words, you use. :)
ha let that bohemian heart fly....
ReplyDeletehappy is a good way to be
rain/clouds come to us all
but dont dictate our smile
nice...i like the bohemian heart with wings...sky meeting sea... here's to happiness and going with the wind..
ReplyDeleteh a p p p y-- now THAT is happy! :) ~peace, Jason
ReplyDeleteThis makes me happy. = )
ReplyDeleteThis made my day ... such a "happpy" poem :-)
ReplyDeleteLove your "Bohemian Heart," Sreeja. And yes, it's fine to write "happpy," because it reflects that extra something in your heart that made you write it down in the first place. Peace, Amy
ReplyDeleteSomething about this makes me want to grab hold of a cloud and fly...but today, clear blue skies!
ReplyDeleteThe whole of the vocabulary in this poem is as bohemian as the opening lines.
ReplyDeletenow that happpy happy was part of my half sleepy state...oops sorry...
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot to everybody.....
ReplyDeleteThey are free like clouds on sky
ReplyDeleteRains and builds, goes with wind
One can never lose count on being free! Nicely sreeja!
Hank
Really love the feeling of freedom you give in this poem!!
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting on my poem today. I am looking for a more current poem than this one, but don't find one. I always like to see you around the blogosphere!
Thanks a lot Mary....something or other always kept me away from my pen.....was feeling so sad about it....trying to start once more.....thank you so much!
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