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the citrus taste of lemon tea
tangy saliva oozes
morning runs
through veins
when you brushed
a kiss
a sea-side wind
waved through
tasting salt and primeval
chronicles
yesterday’s metaphysical
reads
precipitated
around consciousness
and you send
salty tangy feelings
i am soul and
body
a sparkle and some
dust
i have settled on
you, dust,
and sparkled up
to galaxies
thirsty of clouds that shower
shall I find in them the enigma---
wrapping a sparkle in dust!
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This is most excellent... love the way you hook me in with that first line..... excellent.
ReplyDeleteAnd I love a reread...
DeleteSo happy you liked it...
DeleteAn excellently painted reflection.
ReplyDeleteI liked the description of a kiss being like a sea side wind.
ReplyDeletewhen you brushed a kiss
ReplyDeletea sea-side wind waved through
tasting salt and primeval chronicles
Sometimes a dear one can unwittingly act differently. But a relationship must be preserved! Very true Sreeja!
Hank
Thank you all!
ReplyDeleteLove the sensory detail but most specially the sparkle in the dust ~
ReplyDeleteA beautiful read Sreeja ~
I'm taken with the "sparkle in dust" too. Great write!
ReplyDeletei am soul and body
ReplyDeletea sparkle and some dust
i have settled on you, dust,
and sparkled up to galaxies
thirsty of clouds that shower
shall I find in them the enigma---
wrapping a sparkle in dust!
This is sooooo beautiful!!❤️
This is a really, really beautiful poem.
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