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yesterday
noon’s rain stubbornly hanged to the atmosphere;
what if it is in pain, persistently erasing things from memoir?
yesterday
morning the streets were busy; people going, coming;
behind
the doors and windows, are they soothing bruises; bathing?
was
it not storms, hunger, calamities, fear and doubts of existence
that
named, implied, devised and marginalized hope with godliness?
yesterday
noon’s rain stubbornly hanged to the atmosphere and
wasn’t
it tranquillity that breezed through families staying inside?
now at night even the rain got tired and ended
with soft lullaby,
isn’t
this lullaby, the embracing cool wind that sends warmth inside
that
every single soul on earth dreaming, chasing, desiring?
if
there is something more precious will you just poke me,
for I am going to sleep with rain’s lullaby,
and teach me that secret?After long hours of rain and wind, it is so cool, calm and soothing, so writing something in haste to go and sleep under a warm blanket; is it something so irresponsible?
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Rain's lullaby, that's peaceful I agree. :)
ReplyDeleteGoing to sleep with rain's lullaby -- what a peaceful way to end a day.
ReplyDeleteLove it..... For me evokes memories of getting out of the rain and under a poncho to sleep, a truly magnificent feeling.
ReplyDeleteI love the going to sleep with rain's lullaby...so peaceful.
ReplyDeleteLove the way you have weaved the relief of rain into your questions... how great to get a lullaby like that.
ReplyDeleteNature has every solution for us .
ReplyDelete"rain got tired and ended with soft lullaby" Love this I can feel the soothing peace of the rain
ReplyDeleteI liked this line: "if there is something more precious will you just poke me"
ReplyDeleteA wonderful conversational tone to this eloquently sketched slice-of-life that ends so cozily and peacefully.
ReplyDeleteOh, I will not wake you from this excellent shared lullaby. Marvelous!
ReplyDeleteThe rain... Very imaginative. Wonderfully woven.
ReplyDeleteI love the rain's lullaby too. So soothing and peaceful. Some lovely lines here Sreeja....
ReplyDelete...and in the soothing sleep of rain's lullaby, perhaps all your questions will be answered. Perhaps, just perhaps.
ReplyDeleteA rain's lullaby will always be mesmerizing having the pitter patter coupled with the coolness of the day all in one!
ReplyDeleteHank
I love that rain's lullaby specially at night...very soothing!
ReplyDeleteSo soothing.
ReplyDeleteFinally managed to get out of the Chinese firewall and catch up on the Blogspot posts. Truly grateful to soak myself in the unfeigned peacefulness of your poem.
ReplyDeleteThe lullaby of rain....this is definitely the most comforting of rains..like a soft down comforter. Sadly, in hurricanes of late, that rain is pounding...such a heavy march that it weighs down the blanket to smother those beneath it. But yes....I much prefer your lullaby of rain. :)
ReplyDeleteRain is always mesmerising. You have portrayed it in a lovely way.
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