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existence,
wrapped in time and,
reflections
in and out
of the five senses,
illusions;
rain drops on leaves
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happiness
is dancing rain drops
on leaves
red and green
they dance, drips and moistures
past and all seasons
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I really love how you have used the form... with the various length i can hear those raindrops falling.
ReplyDeleteLovely poems! I can hear the rain drops in your poems.
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful....natures gift and your gift of words!!
ReplyDeleteHow beautiful! Tanka-like in mood if not syllables, particularly the first.
ReplyDeleteAh - nicley done vivid images
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Gorgeously penned!!💕
ReplyDeleteYes, perfect.
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThe glory and beauty held in raindrops brings such awe.
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