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light-flooded night killed all the stars
the sparkle of moist lips brightened up a million
winter is slowly moving to summer’s warmth
and with you I fancy them both together
the waves seem tranquil at horizon’s vanishing point
no sky and ocean but shades of warmth together
you seem to hold the cosmos in your parted lips
and we forget the boundaries of an all sponsored world
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"and with you I fancy them both together" and then, "you seem to hold the cosmos in your parted lips": That's romance in its perfection. A lovely verse, Sreeja.
ReplyDeletelight flooded night killed all the stars, a sad opening but a happy ending
ReplyDeleteMy goodness this is absolutely stunning, Sreeja! ❤️ Especially love; “you seem to hold the cosmos in your parted lips,” 😍😍😍 Thank you so much for participating!
ReplyDeleteVery lovely, Sreeja!
ReplyDeleteToo bad the "light-flooded night killed all the stars," but nice that the couple seem starry-eyed anyway :-)
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your poem!!
ReplyDeleteA fun read, Sreeja. Yes, it is easy to forget the boundaries of the world when kissing in embrace. Hmmm.
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Oooh - that last line is perfect!
ReplyDelete"light-flooded night killed all the stars"
ReplyDeleteYour opening line reports so aptly the egotism of lovers, for being totally absorbed in each other, all else is nothing.
Thanks for dropping by my blog sreeja
Much🌻love
I just love how everything seems (and is) so much better when shared with someone who completes us.
ReplyDeleteLove this poem, sreeja! Last line was perfect.
ReplyDeleteWhat an absolutely beautiful set of couplets.
ReplyDeleteSuch rich imagery and verse!
ReplyDelete"you seem to hold the cosmos in your parted lips"...Love, love this line. The content is so rich in imagery.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem, Sreeja.
ReplyDeleteWow! "shades of warmth" is all in the space of moist breath!
ReplyDeleteLove makes our wintry hearts become summery, don't you think?
ReplyDeleteThank you all💜💜
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